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You Broke My Heart…
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-Multi-Age › Slash - Male/Male
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Category:
-Multi-Age › Slash - Male/Male
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
1
Views:
3,792
Reviews:
4
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
Disclaimer:
I do not own the Lord of the Rings (and associated) book series, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
You Broke My Heart…
Title: You Broke My Heart… 1/1
Type: FPS
Author: Sivan Shemesh sivan325@walla.co.il
Beta: Elvengoddess911
Rating: PG?
Pairing: Legolas/?, ?/Thranduil
Warning: Character death.
Disclaimer: The usual cast, they do not belong to me.
Timeline: AU
Summary: Legolas heart is broken when he caught his love, in the middle of lovemaking.
Author note: From Legolas’ POV.
~
Mirkwood
I walked within my forest, and I felt so happy; my father already gave me his blessing, for he saw how I loved my lover.
I took a breath and looked over the trees, enjoying the sight. The golden leaves fell softly, stroking my face. The trees sang to me. I felt happy, as I thought the worst is over.
Apparently I was wrong.
I turned to my chamber, seeking for my lover. I desired him, and wanted to feel him once more.
He was not in my room. I felt nerv I d I did not know where he was.
I started to call his name, as I felt an ache in my heart. I began to worry.
No one had seen him, I felt that I was losing control. I feared.
I heard a noise came from my father’s chamber; it was a little strange to me. I did not dare to open the door, but I change my mind when I heard my lover’s voice.
I opened the door without making any noise and saw…
I collapsed on the floor, my mouth was open, I could not believe of what I had seen.
‘No, it cannot be,’ I thought to myself.
I began to scream; it was like the wrath yell, as they searched for my lost soul.
He watched me; he and my father watched me. I wanted to say something but I could not say anything, as my voice trailed off.
My heart, I could hear how my heart began to break; it was like broken glass. I wish you could have heard it, my love.
I wish you will grieve me, when you love me once.
I watched you one last time, as I wondered why you did it, why you broke my heart.
I thought you loved me.
He approached me followed by my father, and he only said: “I know that you did it with my father, and I thought you want me to do it as well.”
I said, before I took my last breath “I never did it, as my heart was always with you, and belonged to you. You could have asked me.”
My eyes were shut, I could see in my mind only the darkness as the light was gone, and so was my love.
I could see you from Mandos’ Halls crying with despair, and I said: ‘Now you know the price for breaking my heart.’
The End?
R/R
Type: FPS
Author: Sivan Shemesh sivan325@walla.co.il
Beta: Elvengoddess911
Rating: PG?
Pairing: Legolas/?, ?/Thranduil
Warning: Character death.
Disclaimer: The usual cast, they do not belong to me.
Timeline: AU
Summary: Legolas heart is broken when he caught his love, in the middle of lovemaking.
Author note: From Legolas’ POV.
~
Mirkwood
I walked within my forest, and I felt so happy; my father already gave me his blessing, for he saw how I loved my lover.
I took a breath and looked over the trees, enjoying the sight. The golden leaves fell softly, stroking my face. The trees sang to me. I felt happy, as I thought the worst is over.
Apparently I was wrong.
I turned to my chamber, seeking for my lover. I desired him, and wanted to feel him once more.
He was not in my room. I felt nerv I d I did not know where he was.
I started to call his name, as I felt an ache in my heart. I began to worry.
No one had seen him, I felt that I was losing control. I feared.
I heard a noise came from my father’s chamber; it was a little strange to me. I did not dare to open the door, but I change my mind when I heard my lover’s voice.
I opened the door without making any noise and saw…
I collapsed on the floor, my mouth was open, I could not believe of what I had seen.
‘No, it cannot be,’ I thought to myself.
I began to scream; it was like the wrath yell, as they searched for my lost soul.
He watched me; he and my father watched me. I wanted to say something but I could not say anything, as my voice trailed off.
My heart, I could hear how my heart began to break; it was like broken glass. I wish you could have heard it, my love.
I wish you will grieve me, when you love me once.
I watched you one last time, as I wondered why you did it, why you broke my heart.
I thought you loved me.
He approached me followed by my father, and he only said: “I know that you did it with my father, and I thought you want me to do it as well.”
I said, before I took my last breath “I never did it, as my heart was always with you, and belonged to you. You could have asked me.”
My eyes were shut, I could see in my mind only the darkness as the light was gone, and so was my love.
I could see you from Mandos’ Halls crying with despair, and I said: ‘Now you know the price for breaking my heart.’
The End?
R/R