Welcome to Rivendell
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Lord of the Rings Movies › Het - Male/Female
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
2
Views:
10,349
Reviews:
14
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
Category:
Lord of the Rings Movies › Het - Male/Female
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
2
Views:
10,349
Reviews:
14
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
Disclaimer:
I do not own the Lord of the Rings book series and movie series, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
replies to my reviews
My thanks to everyone who has read this story and to everyone who has reviewed or will review.
If you'd like to see more of Erlond's games and pleasures, just let me know. I have several more written and I will find the time to place them here if people just let me know that this story line is liked!
Thanks to everyone again!
Amoureux De Sang
"its a good story...but u have it in the wrong category.....there were also quite a few spelling mistakes to it.....but other than that it was great, u should continue it...there'd be so much u could do with a fic like this....ok??
MUAH!
Aggie"
Thankies! I fixed the spelling errors. But I'm much too lazy to move the category. lol.
TicTac 2004-04-26 id # 200033
Very nice, I'm enjoying it so far. And to answer your question, why not do both? Introduce more girls and let them all get to know each other. Perhaps they could plot some sort of group revenge.
I'm considering just this.. adding to the story by making different stories instead of just one chapter. And if I thought it would interest people, I'd expand on WHY they are there and all.
Tinx Tinxiebell@hotmail.com 2004-06-03 id # 226808
Wow! i think you should definately carry on with her i want to see how they handle the aftermath of this!
i enjoyed reading it PLEASE carry on!
Lol, i've thought of adding a chapter of how she pays rent.
Litz 2004-06-05 id # 228266
Well, I can tell you that I liked it. Very much so. Elrond as a horny virgin-ruining elf-lord. Fascinating. Go ahead and write more. I can't wait to see what could happen next.
I view elves as too sexy to not want lots of sex.
Tenar10r tenar10r@yahoo.com 2004-06-14 id # 233117
sence
repeted
hermind
moaved
carrassed
chissiled
Spell-check, please spell-check! I suggest running your story through 'Word' or even an email edit program
that will spell-check for you, some even do a grammar check as well. Take the time to proof read before
you publish as well. I think you havgoodgood start but this story was a difficult read just due to the grammatical
and spelling issues. You have a good handle on keeping a scene lively and exciting. Your over all descriptions
are vivid. Your story is definitely worth reading, and I hope you write more; just polish it a little before you
present it. Your writing has a spark that many others are definitely missing!
Thank you very much, it means a lot to hear that. I ran it through word as well as finally got a beta on it. :)
Meghan 2004-06-15 id # 233894
Wow! You should definately keep this story going. I love it! I like to see how they handle the
"morning after", ect.. there's a lot you could do with this story. I know I'd read it.
Thank you. I think I'm finally going to do that.
dee 2004-11-08 id # 1920270571
I say go for it keep up the writing.
Thank you! I hope to!
Island Dreams 2005-01-22 id # 2035134614
You should deffinately expand on her story some more like why she's in Rivendell
Yeah, I've heard that alot, not just here but on my other postings, so I think I could do that...
Nienna 2005-01-24 id # 2035137039
WHO is 'She?' Does she have a name? Is she Elven, human, demon??? Why is she there? And why is sex and/or her virginity the deciding factor? Safety from what? Definitely continue this, because this just doesn't make sense and you have a TON of questions to answer! FYI, you need to tell us the character's NAME, usually by the end of the first paragraph.
Now, get to work!
She doesn't have a name, because as it is she could be anyone. People who read this can place themselves into her shoes because she doesnt have an identity. Plus, it says that shes a human, and that shes there for safety.. and keeping in mind with the times, her village was more then likely burned, shes scared and is seeking to rid her of her fears. And the virginity.. what better way then to make someone feel like they need you, to leave your mark on a person then to be their first. Erlond is using the girls he does this with.
Lilslasher 2005-02-13 id # 2035153860
Wonderful story!
I particularly enjoyed the way you left out her name, implying that she is unimportant to Elrond, having no identity, less than human.
He gets what he wants and in return certain humans can enjoy the safety of Rivendell until the elves leave. To me it implies that the humans must reduce themselves to a subservient level in order to stay among the elves, who are superior.
Why, thank you. you understood exactly!!
Alexandra 2005-04-11 id # 2035209133
Makes me wish I were a virgin! That was incredibly hot!
oh i know.. when I wrote this I was like "damn.. wish this was me." lol
If you'd like to see more of Erlond's games and pleasures, just let me know. I have several more written and I will find the time to place them here if people just let me know that this story line is liked!
Thanks to everyone again!
Amoureux De Sang
"its a good story...but u have it in the wrong category.....there were also quite a few spelling mistakes to it.....but other than that it was great, u should continue it...there'd be so much u could do with a fic like this....ok??
MUAH!
Aggie"
Thankies! I fixed the spelling errors. But I'm much too lazy to move the category. lol.
TicTac 2004-04-26 id # 200033
Very nice, I'm enjoying it so far. And to answer your question, why not do both? Introduce more girls and let them all get to know each other. Perhaps they could plot some sort of group revenge.
I'm considering just this.. adding to the story by making different stories instead of just one chapter. And if I thought it would interest people, I'd expand on WHY they are there and all.
Tinx Tinxiebell@hotmail.com 2004-06-03 id # 226808
Wow! i think you should definately carry on with her i want to see how they handle the aftermath of this!
i enjoyed reading it PLEASE carry on!
Lol, i've thought of adding a chapter of how she pays rent.
Litz 2004-06-05 id # 228266
Well, I can tell you that I liked it. Very much so. Elrond as a horny virgin-ruining elf-lord. Fascinating. Go ahead and write more. I can't wait to see what could happen next.
I view elves as too sexy to not want lots of sex.
Tenar10r tenar10r@yahoo.com 2004-06-14 id # 233117
sence
repeted
hermind
moaved
carrassed
chissiled
Spell-check, please spell-check! I suggest running your story through 'Word' or even an email edit program
that will spell-check for you, some even do a grammar check as well. Take the time to proof read before
you publish as well. I think you havgoodgood start but this story was a difficult read just due to the grammatical
and spelling issues. You have a good handle on keeping a scene lively and exciting. Your over all descriptions
are vivid. Your story is definitely worth reading, and I hope you write more; just polish it a little before you
present it. Your writing has a spark that many others are definitely missing!
Thank you very much, it means a lot to hear that. I ran it through word as well as finally got a beta on it. :)
Meghan 2004-06-15 id # 233894
Wow! You should definately keep this story going. I love it! I like to see how they handle the
"morning after", ect.. there's a lot you could do with this story. I know I'd read it.
Thank you. I think I'm finally going to do that.
dee 2004-11-08 id # 1920270571
I say go for it keep up the writing.
Thank you! I hope to!
Island Dreams 2005-01-22 id # 2035134614
You should deffinately expand on her story some more like why she's in Rivendell
Yeah, I've heard that alot, not just here but on my other postings, so I think I could do that...
Nienna 2005-01-24 id # 2035137039
WHO is 'She?' Does she have a name? Is she Elven, human, demon??? Why is she there? And why is sex and/or her virginity the deciding factor? Safety from what? Definitely continue this, because this just doesn't make sense and you have a TON of questions to answer! FYI, you need to tell us the character's NAME, usually by the end of the first paragraph.
Now, get to work!
She doesn't have a name, because as it is she could be anyone. People who read this can place themselves into her shoes because she doesnt have an identity. Plus, it says that shes a human, and that shes there for safety.. and keeping in mind with the times, her village was more then likely burned, shes scared and is seeking to rid her of her fears. And the virginity.. what better way then to make someone feel like they need you, to leave your mark on a person then to be their first. Erlond is using the girls he does this with.
Lilslasher 2005-02-13 id # 2035153860
Wonderful story!
I particularly enjoyed the way you left out her name, implying that she is unimportant to Elrond, having no identity, less than human.
He gets what he wants and in return certain humans can enjoy the safety of Rivendell until the elves leave. To me it implies that the humans must reduce themselves to a subservient level in order to stay among the elves, who are superior.
Why, thank you. you understood exactly!!
Alexandra 2005-04-11 id # 2035209133
Makes me wish I were a virgin! That was incredibly hot!
oh i know.. when I wrote this I was like "damn.. wish this was me." lol