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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
For godness sake write more! write more damn you! I really want to see more of this but darn you, you haven't posted anything new. *sigh*
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have to update this! This story is so fuckin' hot! I need more!
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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Is there any more to this story or are we to think that if you want to hide out with the elves, your body is for their use and brutal use at that? Different kind of elf story.
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April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Makes me wish I were a virgin! That was incredibly hot!
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story!
I particularly enjoyed the way you left out her name, implying that she is unimportant to Elrond, having no identity, less than human.
He gets what he wants and in return certain humans can enjoy the safety of Rivendell until the elves leave. To me it implies that the humans must reduce themselves to a subservient level in order to stay among the elves, who are superior.
I particularly enjoyed the way you left out her name, implying that she is unimportant to Elrond, having no identity, less than human.
He gets what he wants and in return certain humans can enjoy the safety of Rivendell until the elves leave. To me it implies that the humans must reduce themselves to a subservient level in order to stay among the elves, who are superior.
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHO is 'She?' Does she have a name? Is she Elven, human, demon??? Why is she there? And why is sex and/or her virginity the deciding factor? Safety from what? Definitely continue this, because this just doesn't make sense and you have a TON of questions to answer! FYI, you need to tell us the character's NAME, usually by the end of the first paragraph.
Now, get to work!
Now, get to work!
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January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You should deffinately expand on her story some more like why she's in Rivendell
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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I say go for it keep up the writing.
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June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! You should definately keep this story going. I love it! I like to see how they handle the
"morning after", ect.. there's a lot you could do with this story. I know I'd read it.
"morning after", ect.. there's a lot you could do with this story. I know I'd read it.