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for Behind The Dormitory Doors

by dommerry

person Pure Hybrid
schedule August 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
heh. I've only got through chapter one so far, but it's good. just a couple things. in the US, we're required to go to school until we're 16, not 18. 18 is when we become legal adults, but 16 is the cutoff for school.

12 grade - senior
11 grade - junior
10 grade - sophomore
9 grade - freshman.

you said elijah was in 10th grade, but called him a freshman, and then said orli was a sophomore. just to let you know :) I'm off to read the other chapters
person Mistress Brandybuck
schedule July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thank you and thank you!!! I actually have bloody writers block at the moment but I am trying to get chapter five done and for everyone's info this fic will be about 19 chapters long, asuming I counted the months right and other than that my lips are sealed.
Thanx again lol.
person Reno
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! Wonderful plot and characterization with a twist! Everyone would want to go to boarding school if it had students like these! :) I'm shocked that you don't get more reviews! Keep writing, please!
person Amy
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Thankyou. I'm about to read that one you said now. That was a short review, I realised I was late for work reading this fic. Lol. I had to review quickly. There's nothing like a little bit of slto gto get you through the day. Lol.
person Amy
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this!! When is there going to be more?
person Mistress Brandybuck
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Jesus Christ please excuse me while I faint. Someone's actually reviewed my work. Okay I'm calm now and the review is greatly appreaciated Amy! I have wrote more, it's waiting to be typed up, will post it soon. Also there is another story called Boarding School you may want to check out by Ara. I got the idea from her and she's given me a lot of help with mine. It can be found at www.livejournal.com/users/aralainiel.
Thanx again.