rate_review Reviews

I disagree with your comment that you fear this is "a piece of crap." Thus far it seems ratheret aet and
charming in nature. I always enjoy reading stories (on other sites) of Legolas' childhood adventures and
yours is a fine beginning. I do rather wonder, however, why you've placed it on an aggressively risque
story site, and can only assume you're intending to head off into a goldmine of angst . . .

I hope you'll continue your work.
Best wishes.
spiffy

It's not crap at all.I compliment you on how many ideas you can cook up.I do hope that you continue this a little longer.

This is a very interesting plot devise, and I for one would love to see you continue it. My interest was captured by the short, oh so stort, teaser of a first chapter you put up. Please continue this, please!

i don't hink its a piece of crap it really is an interesting premise--i think you should run with it--the second was much stronger than the first and i'm sure it would progress as such....

I like it. I always thought the pairing Thranudil/Glorfindel as parents of Legolas was interesting but I would never trust anything i wrote to post. PLEASE continue. PLots can always change. Maybe Glorfindel can find out somehow, perhaps by over hearing Thranduil and Celeborn talking...Thranduil and Celeborn arae cousins? Interesting thought. Gotta go tho. Continue soon?

But I am satisfied. I want to read more. Please do not just stop, you know me, I love your stuff. Update soon.

I really like your story! Keep going.

That was a nice chappy. More detailed and I like seeing Haldir as a personal 'nanny'. Keep it up and you will do fine