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for Gwain Noss

by Aithilin

person Ashitakia
schedule August 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is cute. Personally, I think you should have Glorfindel overhear Thranduil talking to Elrond about his son and then have the confrontation. It'll bring drama into the story.
person Carmella
schedule July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey its great more please?
person Vuaryn
schedule July 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see that you decided to continue. I like this fic, nice little idea and it will be interesting to read at how Haldir is going to fuss over Legolas since he is his personal Nanny
person Nidia
schedule July 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is sad... that you won't continue I mean...
person Ryou\'sMistress265
schedule July 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
To be honest, i have no clue why you started this fic if you didn't intend to finish. However the plot is really good and i think you should continue but i can take over your mind and firce you to continue, so whatever.
person Lady of Legolas
schedule July 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sorry,I have zero knowledge on writing.Anyway,maybe a flashback on before Thranduil gave birth to Legolas.His feelings on how Glorfindel will feel if he did tell him he could conceive.
person Kira
schedule July 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi,

You need ideas?

Hot sex scene between Thranduil and Glorfindel?
A visit to LothLorien/ a visit from LothLorien?
Thranduil writing a letter to Legolas? Hot sex between adult Legolas and Haldir?
Hot sex?

Bye~
Kira
person Lady Lynet ap Evyn
schedule July 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
How f*cking depressing... I was actually getting into this fic... and then *bam* You do what everyone else does and discontinue it.
person Anon
schedule July 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So if you've definitely got no plans to finish this fic, why bother starting it in the first place? Seems pretty pointless to me, especially when people (myself included) are enjoying it after only the first two chapters.

Sorry, but in my opinion there's nothing worse.
person Lady of Legolas
schedule July 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ARGH!I couldn't get the 2nd chapter at FF.net.Bastards!Anyway,like I said,it is not crap and since I love mpregnancies,please do continue.