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by BloodyAce

schedule August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Im so exited to see how Glorfindel will react. It will be so worth the wait. so please update soon.
schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story looks very promising, and I can't wait to see more of it.

The only thing is that I would like to see a little more punctuation in your writing. A lot of things flow together in a way that makes the sentence feel awkward.

Beyond that, I'm really excited for the next chapter ^^
person Elftart
schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic, can't wait .please update soon. I hope we see more twin action as well.
great story line