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for Broken

by Cheysuli

person anna
schedule July 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yes I love it!but could we have some merpip/frodosam-sex too?update soon please
person Andmetwen
schedule July 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
it actually wasn't that bad. i certainly didn't get nauseous but i guess i've always been the sick twisted person in the family. lol. i liked the chapter but it would be better if longer. i wonder waht merry's gonna do with the bitter almond...? i think that's what it was called. anyhoo...put up more when you get the chance!!
person lilyann
schedule June 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
please update SOOOOOON!!!!!
person sofia
schedule June 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story, keep writing, can't wait till the next chapter, POOR legolas
person perrito
schedule June 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow...I thought i would never read your fanfiction again! I haven't seen any of your postings for a while...guess I was looking in the wrong places...

This story is awesome, I love the way you're able to convey the scenes to your audience with such clarity and vivid-ness. Also, you portray the way the characters view one another very well (like how Frodo and Sam believe the other two hobbits to be a bit dumb). However, what is this new place the hobbits and Legolas have been moved to? Is it a slave compound, a city?...do Frodo and Sam run it or do they answer to higher authorities?...what exactly do Frodo and Sam do and how did they geet to be here?...

I can't wait til the updates for the next chapters, so update soon, soon, SOON!!!

!Hasta luego! (See ya later)

Oh yeah, I love the parts in which Aragorn and the rest of the fellowship (excluding those two /evil/ hobbits) are taking care of Legolas...the tension and fear and confusion is so tangible! Awesome story!
person Elendrila
schedule June 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
thanx 4 mailing me the chappy, can u do that mor often? very nice chappy, u r a good writer
person maikafuiniel
schedule June 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have taken it upon myself to review every flippin' chapter since so few will.

This is such a good story, continue quick!
person Brittney
schedule June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wut's frodo getting??? i never thought i'd live to see the day when frodo and sam went evil and turned on my elf!! anywho, i'm really enjoying this!!!! i can actually picture leggy's poor, glistening body in my mind's eye!! yes, yes, i know, i'm sick!! please update!!!
person bloodyrose2310
schedule June 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow more more more more more more
person emma
schedule May 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey! Pssst! It's me-emma-from Ring Around the Merry--right above your story! This is very original! I've never seen this variation! Do keep going! And I'd love to see some interaction between Merry, pippin and frodo instead of just wondering how they got set up working in the kitchens! Really-I would!

If you get board and want to see Merry do horrid things to the other hobbits, just push that button --yes--the one right abve you!

I love your Merry and Pip--so very sweet. What if they approached frodo to ask for medicine? or would that not go so well? What if they tried to escape?

--emma