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for Broken

by Cheysuli

person Cait
schedule September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Im sorry to say but it was a little bit rushed. But so happy you finally upgraded. Ive been waiting and checking everyday for the next chapter. Chapter 10 was good but who is the new elf? And is Legolas really going to be given to the guards? UPGRADE ASAP!!!! PLEASEEEE
person Calenharn Elflover
schedule September 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, *why* do I think that this overheard guards' conversation is what is going to push Merry over the edge, into poisoning Legolas? (Better dead, than ...) *moan* *looks for "character death" warning*

And *who* can the other unfortunate elf be???

Thanks for updating... but you *know* that you can't leave us dangling here like this! Please update soon.
person ahem...perrito
schedule September 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WHAT THE FUCK HAPPENED!!!! Have you fucking died and gone to HELL??!!!! Update this story DAMNIT!~

Phew...just had to get all that out. But seriously, what's going on? I really really really like this story and frankly the part that you left it at didn't really conclude it in any way in case that's what your perceptions was. I wanna know if Aragorn rescues Legolas or Legolas regains his self control and kills Frodo and Sam...or SOMETHING!!! PWEASE...PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon!!!
person Edenvain
schedule August 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You MUST continue! Cliffhanger grrrrrr PLEASE PLEASE keep going!!!!!
person CC
schedule August 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
O.O NOOOOOOO!!! CLIFFHANGER!!!!!! YOU HAVEN'T UPDATED IN A WHILE, DOES THAT MEAN YOU ARE FINISHED WITH THIS WONDERFUL STORY?!?!?!?! PLEASE go on!! I put this story with my favorites. (Ever.) ^_^

~Your fan CC
person Roux
schedule August 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Don't stop with tstorstory! AHHHHHHHH IT'S SO GREAT!!!!
person Deva Dance
schedule August 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Don't stop with this story!!! Tis gold, love. Savvy?
person Christina
schedule August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Me again! I was thinking a little a few minutes ago of the story, and I thought of an idea. I know after 9 chapters, you are probably thinking hard for a new idea, so I thought I'd help you out. I think you should make it so that Frodo and Sam allow the guards to have Legolas just once for punishment. >;)
person Christina
schedule August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
After reading all of that, all I have to say is WOW!!! I have never read anything like this. It is wonderful!!! I REALLY hope you do NOT stop with this story. I love it!!! Oh, WOW I love it!!
person Elflover
schedule July 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
No, no, no. You're not thinking *gasp* of *poisoning* Legolas, are you?

Even to put him out of his misery??

How *can* you (er, Merry) -- given the hope of Aragorn leading an uprising -- rescue *will* come, won't it? *On time*????