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for Sweet Desire

by angstyelves

person Ertia
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*snicker* Hee hee! Actually, I'm completely appalled! As one who is always in search of the perfect hot chocolate I simply do NOT understand the point of contaminating it with peppermint! GACH!
(If I'm convincing enough in that, d'dyou think Lindir would try to convince me, too?)
person tineryn
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My fault!

This story really did turn out well, dear. It was cute, and you successfully brought everyone's minds into the gutter. I imagine it was an awful shock to find out how innocent everything really was at the end.

Good job!