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by Tror

person Minui
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story, you have a nice writing style and I love this couple <3 More!
person Minui
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story, you have a nice writing style and I love this couple! I demand more! (And a cold shower...)
person mangy_mongrel
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh. Sweet, but still sounds real. Nice combination. :)
person RoseGarden
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this was one of the sweetest 'my first time' fics that I read. I just love how nervous Davie was, because lets' face it, we are all that nervous our first time....no matter the sex of the person. Good job!
person angel
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! that was totally hot! I think I need a cold shower. keep writing! :)
person Britomartis
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very hot...the POV switches were kinda confusing at first, but otherwise chocolate cake and ice cream for yoooooou!

~Bri