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for Laughter Finds Love

by Kaydee

person Princess_Malfoy
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATED SOON... I love your story so far... but I am quite curious to see how everything goes.

Your loyal reader,

Princess_Malfoy aka Jamie
person anonoymous
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ukmmm....hi..... nice story..........The weapon is called a scythe.......
person anonoymous
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
srry, wrong weapon, its sai...
person Red
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I would really like to find out what happens next. The weapon your describing from the movie Electra is called a sai. Also it would be easier to read if you started a new paragraph when someone new talks. I was having trouble figuring out who was talking, but other than that I like it. Has a lot of potential. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
person Yoko-Fox
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your first chapter and would like to know what happens next. ^__^