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for Defeated, But Not Destroyed

by PrettyPrincess

person Kat
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and its killing me to find out what happens next. Please update soon!!!
person Anon
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No! You can't stop it there! I'm loving Orlando as the bad guy. Great writing. I NEED more! I'm addicted.

Keep up the great work.

~Somebody~
person Anon
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Scary! I hope to find out what happens next! Please update soon!
person Kat
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and its killing me to find out what happens next. Please update soon!!!
person hollywoodcowgirl652
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love your story please update soon....
person Kat
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy your story and I hope you continue to write.
person Arden
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really powerful chapter. i love the raw intensity of the characters.the fear, the pain, the desperation. It's so real...i know how she feels. keep it up. i want to read the next chapter. please let Lij save her soon.
person Arden
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really powerful chapter. i love the raw intensity of the characters.the fear, the pain, the desperation. It's so real...i know how she feels. keep it up. i want to read the next chapter. please let Lij save her soon.
person angel
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
orlando sure is a bastard! i can't believe he treats her like that. i also can't believe she actually stays with him. i hope elijah can help her. update soon! :)
person Anon
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! I like it so much! I didn`t find any fics where Orli is bad, so I would like to read more of this! Please UPDATE soon!!!!!!!!!
Rebecca