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for Balrogs, Butterflies & Bondings

by DurOltha

person Gingitsune
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for not reviewing for so long. My internet was down for a week! Sucks! Anyway, I just read all the chapters that you wrote. Great! I'm glad that Glorfindel and Erester finally got together! Plus I get to read about Legolas and Elrond's wedding night! =) Heheh I'm happy. The way you wrote as to how the butterflies ganged up to try to push open the screens were cute to me. Hehe I think it's really sweet as to how they want to get close to Erester. They seemed pretty smart too. Afterall they fly off when Glorfindel asked them to do so. More?
person Ertia
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! I'm glad you made Erestor a nice wicked participant! Those two... why do I have a feeling that they won't necessarily restrict their... ahem.. activities to the bedroom? They just might give the twins a run for their money. :D
person nikkiling
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I LOVE it! Fierce, strong quill indeed! *grin* Wonderful how seemingly shy Erestor gets so fiesty in bed. Can't wait for more!!!
person HHS
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
But does Elrond feel something for Legolas?
person Ertia
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* Ah, that was so sweet! Yes, Elrond would make a delightful first wouldn't he? Of course, he makes a pretty wonderful for anytime, too, I think.
All right, what is up with the butterflies?????? Do we get to hear Thranduil's butterfly story now? Or do we get some hot Erestor & Glori action? (Don't blame Erestor about not wanting to sleep with that portrait looking at him, though!)
person Ocean_Soul
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm so jealous that Legolas' sister got to see the twins..in a... hmmm.... compromising situation... :)

I looked your recomended reading but none of those are as good as your works. :)
Your subjects maybe odd but they got me hooked. I don't know how you do it but it is working.
You're welcome. I'm glad I lifted your spirits up. :)
person Ertia
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:D Oh, you do not know how badly I needed an update today!
That Malwen! Quite erotic, indeed! And more than willing to speak her mind, as well, I see. She and Elrond may just have made a good match after all! lol ALthough, I cannot say that Elrond would think too highly of his wife *visiting* with his sons. lol
Poor Elrond. I do think I've quite exhausted him. Even my jokes about the legendary stamina of the Elves seem to be having little effect. *sigh*
person Tanya G
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Elrond is soo cute in this chapter.. so giddy.. and I cannot wait to see what happens next... Im very excited... so please update soon.. THANK YOU
person Ertia
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think they are going to be VERY good for each other! :D
Poor Thranduil. Out-manuvered and out-Advisored! Looking forward to more!
And thanks, I'm just taking everything one day at a time. It's all we can do. :)
person Ocean_Soul
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your works they are absolutely fantastic! You really are the best author ever! Hope you will update soon again.