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for Balrogs, Butterflies & Bondings

by DurOltha

person Diane
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My dear DarkDreamer, I'm not much of a reviewer; English is not my first language (French is) so I'm always struggling just to kind of make sense! But I'm sometimes compelled to say something and to you, DarkDreamer, I want to say this: I LOVE YOU and I worship the keyboard you write on!There are many kinds of writing and of storytelling; somes stories and author are more complexe than others. That does not mean they are better; they are just different. You have some of the great qualities that make a good author: you entertain me, you make me laugh, you make me cry, you make me care for your characters. I love your stories (yes! I've read them all!) and you make my day every time you update. I hope you are going to be around for a long time. And to that dreadful Anonymous I have this to say: first, you are a f*cking coward to not sign what you are writing and second, as we say in my beautiful language: va te faire foutre! So, DarkDreamer, keep up the good work and be certain that I will always be there, reading! Hugs and kisses, Diane P.S: could you please send me the painter who did the mural of the lusty Erestor?I have some walls that need to be done soon. Let me see: one with Erestor, one with Glorfindel, one with the twins...
person Lisn
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh OH! A little father/son bonding, perhaps?? A talk about the birds and the bees or the bees and the bees, maybe??? Or Legolas' future as Elrond's consort??? WHO KNOWS!! WOW! I luv this story! Damn! I'm sounding like a broken record, saying the same stuff over and over and over again! OH WELL!!
person Gingitsune
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to read that you are getting harassed by some anonymous reviewer. There will always be such people who ignore the warnings and then flame the author for daring to write about yaoi, the horror! Duhz......don't like, don't read. Don't bash other's work just because you don't like it. It's because of such intolerant people that we still have wars in the world. Sigh......on a happier mode, another chapter! *glomps* So Erester is indeed the lost heir. I wonder what Thranduil has to say to Legolas. Haha maybe something about the royal wood elves being able to bear young even if they are male *snickers* wouldn't they all be surprised if that happens? Lol. Hey keep your spirits up and don't let some stupid asshole spoil your day. Ja ne~
person aglarien
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know, as much as I love Sapphire Eyes, I think I love this one more. Wonderful story, sweetie - where do you get all your so charming ideas?
Hugs,
Agie
person Ertia
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wheee! Two whole chapters to come home to! Thank you! Been a very long and difficult weekend and I'm glad we had some light chappies this week! Erestor, the lost lord! How wonderful! heh heh.. flowers and butterflies! :D
Now, I'm off to play with my pe... er... Lord Elrond. He's been quite patient while I was away!
person Ertia
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And ignore the troll, They obviously have such pathetic lives that they have nothing to do but harrass others.
person Anonymous
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now I know you're a crackpot author! No self-respecting lover of Tolkien would use that shitty book! And I know you could not possibly use those sites as reference for your Elvish because you use specific grelvish words that are all through the fanfiction in this fandom. Stop trying to make yourself look smart - you aren't. You need a beta reader, you need to learn the language you are butchering, and you need to stop having conversations in your chapters to people here. It's tacky.
person Tanya G
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Legolas and Elrond together are very cute, I cannot wait to see more interaction between them. And YAY to Erestor finally learning his background. Very well done.
person nikkiling
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so AWESOME! I can just see it in my mind; all those daggers flying, and then the elves leaping to retreive them, turning flips and all that. Beautiful! I wonder who actually killed the spider though... *shiver* And can I borrow him? Please? Had to deal with two on my own last night who seemed to be guarding my door, and suffice to say after much squeeling and shreeking, I was finally able to escape my apartment! And I just know there's another one around here... waiting to get me when I least expect it...
Ahem. Anyways, that was really cool! But the cliffhanger (AGAIN!) was really quite annoying. I am so glad you're a fast updater! *grin*
person Lisn
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BE ONE WITH THE NATURE ERESTOR!! Another chapter!! And another shit- eating grin!!!! I LUV THIS FIC!!