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for Balrogs, Butterflies & Bondings

by DurOltha

person HHS
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More Erestor!!!
person Lisn
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh OH!!!! Is there going to be a little action between the Mirkwood King and the twins???? Hmmm... only time will tell!
person Ertia
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah! HAH! I wonder what those devious twins are up to with all their thanking and all! ;)
But what a nice chapter, and a nice bit of insight into Thranduil's character as well.
Ah, yes. I'll just send Elrond back on his way, with an extra bag of jelly bellies for the trouble. (Think I taught him some bad habits...), and take a nap before Celeborn arrives. Wouldn't do to be all worn out!

person Lisn
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What more is there to say??????????? Another FINE chapter! But, u know that already!
person Lisn
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There is no more to say! You know me too well already!
person Ertia
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wheee! Two chapters to come home to!
lol I loved Erestor and Glori in the storeroom. Poor Melpomaen... and to have to loan his robe out, too!
Well, well... Thranduil helping out the twins... I do wonder where you're going with those three. I guess I'll just have to be patient, won't I?

Hmm... well, Elrond and I are getting along fine, really, but he is missing Celebrian a bit and looking a bit tired. Hmmm, Wonder if Celeborn is busy....
person Tanya G
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Havent commented in a little bit... But I have been reading.. The Elrond and Legolas scenes were great. And yay to Erestor finally remembering a little more...
person nikkiling
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haha! A drunk Erestor! How fun is that?!
Punishment, eh? *...eyes the elf eagerly...* Oooooh! At your command!
*snicker*
person HHS
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm kind of liking the nickname "Dark Butterfly" that was suggested by another reader.Yeah,he has dark hair and his buterfly hairclip.
person nikkiling
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Two 'Eww's in one chapter! Yeah! *grin*
And I love how the twins seem too busy to pull pranks. Ha!
As far as pet names go, I'm absolutely horrible at such things. Dark Butterfly? (wouldn't that just make Erestor scream?! *snicker*)