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for Balrogs, Butterflies & Bondings

by DurOltha

person nikkiling
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I must say, you do have a way with words. I love it when Glorfindel tells Erestor that having that mural is creepy. And are you going to have Legolas say 'Eeew' in this fic too at some point? I just love it when he does that! *grin* I can just see it in my head, and it's so cute! Just like Glorfindel's 'That is creepy'. And Legolas' love of chocolate... It's the little things, you know? I just love little details! Especially cute ones!
And I thank you for your compliment. I'm glad you're enjoying my little piece of fluff. (Hmmm... only I would call something like that fluff... ah well. Wait 'til you see the NEXT one I have planned! Bwa-ha-ha! *evil grin*)
person Sheeijan
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First, I want to say "thank you" for updating so quickly. It's awesome!

Second, wow! You keep throwing the curveballs one after another. So Elrond's about to get hitched, and the bride definitely wants to be a runaway. Hmm, I think I smell where this might be heading (I hope, I hope!). I can't wait to see more of that front.

Still very intriguing, really enjoying this!
person katy
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(UGHFFF!! No Erestor?!?!?)
So, the plot thickens... i bite my knuckles with anticipation of the next chapter :)
person Ertia
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heeeeyyyy, wait a minute!!!!!!!! Something about this chapter had been bugging me all day...something I seemed to be missing. And then, there I was walking home from work and suddenly it came to me! Dreamer doesn't write HET!!!!!!!!!!!!! What's going on here? I don't believe for half a second that you'd let Elrond marry an... *gasp* elleth!
:D Methinks you have something up your sleeve, dearie!
person Ertia
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*tackle* *thunk* *crash* *roll*
shrmmmrfffff.... "Hallo, Lord Elrond. Pleasant evening? Would those happen to be strawberry jelly bellies on your chest?"

Not up to anything, eh? Just as Legolas is not up to anything by looking over that contract, I suppose? Fine! Keep your secrets and I'll just keep reading.. as soon as I get this lovely Elf Lord somewhere more...ummm...private. :)
person Celegorm
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, so the plot thickens. I wonder where it will all lead. I hope Thranduil is not 'evil' however, I dislike it when he is portrayed like that. But I will wait to see what you have in store before I jump to conclusions.

I understand your problems with spelling and grammar, if you wish I am willing to point out errors, as you seem willing to learn. However, I will not take offence if you prefer me not to.

Regards,
Celegorm
person Ertia
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! How curious. Erestor is afraid of butterflies? How very odd! But now I'm dying of curiousity. Glorfindel must have been entirely stricken to go leaving his sword lying about. *hee hee... Glorfindel's ummm...sword...hmmm...."
person Sheeijan
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK, the thing with the butterflies has me absolutely baffled. What in the world? He's a butterfly magnet?
person katy
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhh updated so soon! :)
I LOVE the way you write these characters!!! I also like the way your writing effortlessly conjours up images of surroundings and people without over describing everything.
Cant wait for the next installment.
person nikkiling
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooh, butterflies! How interesting! And nightmares! I do so love nightmares! *grin* And a Glorfindel/Erestor pairing! Yeah!
I'm so glad to find you posting another story so soon...very, very interesting. I have this sudden disturbing image in my head of thousands of butterflies gathered over something, completely covering it with wings gently fanning, and then suddenly all taking flight to reveal a bloody corpse beneath. *shiver* I have no idea where that came from...