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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is getting intense. I like it! I can't wait until your next update (yaaaaa! you did your Mwahahaha at the end).:)
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh! i like you. great chapter by the way. lots of emotion. jared is right though, kate is a bitch! how could she do that. i hope evrything works out. oh, by the way, you didn't say Mwahahaha at the end of the chapter. i like that! :)
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June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i sure hope dave gets to see his daughter again. it would be very sad if he doesn't. i'm also glad that viggo and sean's kids took the news of their relationship pretty good. keep writing. :)
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dave's ex is really starting to piss me off! i hope she doesn't talk his daughter away. please tell me she doesn't PLEASE!!! anyway, great chapter as always. can't wait to read some more. :)
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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter. it's starting to get tense. i hope that david still gets to see his daughter. can't wait to find out. write soon! :)
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!!! please! that's so good!
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story so far Lahja. Can't wait to see what you do with it.
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Forgot something. Nobody kill me for not knowing this....but who in the hell is Harry??? OC?
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please do continue this story, I really want to find out what happens to Dave.
This is a good story
This is a good story
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story! i hope that dave's ex doesn't take his daughter away from him after she gets married. she sounds so sweet. i love the pink t-shirt, it just cracks me up. keep writing! :)