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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! how could you!? I can't believe you killed him off!!! I cried, i litteraly had tears streaming down my face with this chapter, and now that you have made me cry you better make up for it in you next chapters... you had better give dave back his kid, have some get married, put orlando with some better, make lijah happy, a whole hell of lota happiness better be going on in the next chapters you write.... please update soon with happy chapters, no more death!!!!!!!!!
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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter. even though jared is gone it was nice to have dave visit his grave and put flowers on it. i'm so glad that dave will get to see his daughter again. i can't wait! update soon. :)
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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YIPPIY SKIPPY!!!!!!!!!!! Dave is happy again and getting his daughter back... now what about everyone else? please update soon I can't wait for the Happy family reunion!!!!
Bunny
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe that jared is dead . i was so hoping that dave and jared would end up together. i really liked jared too. well, i hope you keep your promise and dave ends up happy. maybe he'll end up with elijah, who knows. anyway, update soon and may jared rest in peace. :(
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July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a cliffie!! I'm dying to know what is going to happen. And I'm glad I'm not the only one who was hoping for a Elijah/Orli hook up, but I guess it's not going to happen. Your doing a great job...keep it coming.
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, please continue. I should have reviewed before, but I didn't. I'm sorry. Please update soon! I have a soft spot for Mr. Wenham and there just aren't enough fics out there.
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter as usual. i was kind of hoping that orlando and elijah would end up together, but oh well. i feel really sad for dave, i thought he was going to get together with his friend jared and now it looks like jared isn't going to make it. he is really having an awful time right now. i just hope that things will work out for him. update soon. :)
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter! i can't make up my mind which story line i like best. i guess i'll just have to like them all. i was wondering if you were going to have anything about elijah or orlando in your story. keep up the great writing :)
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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter as usual! poor dave, my heart really aches for him. i loved the interaction between viggo and his son, it was hilarious. i'm glad that harry and karl made up, they are great together. update soon! :)
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter! i feel so sorry for dave, i hope everything works out for him. nice little story between dom and billy. i like dom too! kept the chapters coming. :)