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by Tror

person Zeraphine
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
da du ja dem dokter nen deustchen namen gegeben hast, denke ich du verstehst wenn ich auf deutsch kommentiere ^.~
i hab dei fanfic hier garde erst egfunden und in einem rutsch durchgelesen, und OMG! die is so super... dave als Roo is einfach nur süß... haaach, und Lij/Hunter auch... der Joke von craig und marton war genial... hach, einfach toll... und sonst einfach hot, die story...
mach weiter so, möchte sehen wie es weiter läuft (vor allem zwischen Lij und Hunter)
person angel
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH NO! I hope that Harry gets there in time. I don't think that Karl will do anything that drastic will he? Tell me he won't. It's nice that Orlando and Lorna have found each other. Sean was just too much as the over protective father. I've seen that before. I just love the way Eric is taking such gentle care of Dave. I hope they stay together a long time. Dave deserves to be happy. I wonder what Hunter wants to talk about. He probably wants to talk about what happened. And you didn't mention Elijah in this chapter. I was just wondering how he is handling everything after what happened. Update soon! Or sooner would be even better. :)
person angel
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! i just loved the part with Elijah and Hunter. Totally hilarious! I can't wait to see what Karl does to Craig and Marton. I'm so glad that Dave has found someone like Eric. He deserves to be happy. Update soon.:)
person Ian
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Me again, just writing to ask you a favor.... PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! pleasepleasepleasepleasepleassepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease, "We'll give you gold!", shiny nickel if u name the quote
person Ian
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This has got to be the 2nd best fic I've ever read (#1 goes to Child of the Night in the Dracula fandom strictly because it's still interesting after over 100 chapters, but keep writing like this and you'll surpass it soon enough). The best part has to be the roo/tigger interaction, you keep them adorable yet not nausatingly so. My only complaint, if you can call it that, was who turned out to be 'tigger'. All we knew is that he was big and probably Australian with the roo comments (though not inherently), and with the liberties you took with Jared Leto, I was kind of hoping it was Hugh Jackman (who I guess never did Van Helsing with David). Of course, Eric Bana is equally attractive (...to most, not that i dont find him attractive, but YAY Hugh Jackman), and naturally makes alot more sense as the fic progresses. Still, if you could get him into a happy threesome with Dave and Eric, you'll have made a reader very happy, and isn't that what fan fiction is all about... *crickets chirp*. Anyway, your plot is great, your spelling and grammer are outstanding (i've seen many a promising fic destroyed by people unfamiliar with the English language, but god bless 'em for trying) so keep up the great work!
person angel
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok, i know that you have elijah and orlando being straight but i can hope can't i. great chapter by the way. the movie thing was hilarious. i'm glad dave has eric. i hope they will be very happy together. it was so sweet of eric to ask eliza if it was ok with her if he dated her father. update soon. :)
person angel
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm am so glad that dave has finally found someone. the interaction between them is great! I also like the fact that sean is trying to hide from his birthday party, totally funny. I'm hoping that orlando does not end up with lorna. I don't have anything against her I was just hoping that he would end up with elijah that's all. but i'll just have to wait and see. I know you like to have little twists to keep us guessing. I just LOVE your evil mind. can't wait until the next chapter. :)
person angel
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwww, that was so sweet...another great chapter as usual...thanks for the info on when we will find out about the mysterious man....and also about lij and orli...i hope i'm not being a pest....can't wait til the next chapter...update soon. :)
person angel
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i liked it! i just want to know who this guy is that dave met at the airport... he sounds mysterious... i hope dave finally ends up happy... i like the little teenage crush thing you have going on with viggo and sean's kids... it's so sweet... i'm still so glad that dom is all right... i know that billy will take good care of him... well, i've said it before and i'll continue saying it, i want to know what's going on in elijah and orlando's lives PLEASE!!!! if you don't have any plans to bring them back in the story then i guess i'll just have to learn to live with it. update soon! :)
person angel
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter! i'm glad that dave and his daughter get along real well. i'm also glad that dom is okay. i don't know if i can handle another death. i hope your not going to forget about Elijah and Orlando. i'd like to see something happen with them. keep writing. :)