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for Afraid of the dark?

by Tror

person ramie
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi there,
This is a very good fic! I really like it.
I have seen Donnie Darko (great movie by the way) and I really enjoy the way you write this story so it almost fits in the DD... or whatever you do... Anyway, it's cool
Hope you're up for some more some time... soon!

cheers
ramie
person angel
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well, i still like this story. billy is getting creepier by the minute, i wonder who he really is. i hope dom is careful. i'm glad you finally updated this story. looking forward to more. take care! :)
person angel
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor dom. i hope he can figure out what to do. i still think billy is very creepy, but i like the story so far. keep writing! :)
person Luvey
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm hooked. Please write more!!
person jasmine
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still love it. Good ghost story. Still not sure if Billy is crazy or not and it keeps things interesting.

Keep uo the good work
person angel
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! billy sure sounds creepy to me. i hope dom is careful. i like the story so far. keep writing! :)
person Jasmine
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good start to a good Horror/Ghost story. Loved the way Dom is not sure of his sanity. Very belivable. (sorry about my spelling. I know it sucks.)

Jasmine
person angel
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooooh! sounds kind of creepy. i like it! keep writing! :)