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oh a great chapter! i feel so bad for haldir, he has such a good conscience and a good heart. Now i am worried about what will happen when legolas has to fight again!

More please!
Excellent chapter. Nice development of their friendship. Ummm...you do intend to eventually rescue our boys, don't you?

ARGH!
Don't leave us here! good work with Haldir, though. He did the right thing when all is said and done but still.. poor Elf. He need comforting.

Hmm, yeah, I guess I read that sentence wrong. Can't remember what I read it as, though. Oh well. Yeah, quite familiar with the trees telling the weather thing. Did (either of) you ever have a weather brick? Spurred a memory long buried in my head about being given a brick back in grade school that could tell the weather somehow. Maybe I've lost it, don't know. My mind, I mean, not the brick, although I think I've lost that, too.

Ok, but on to relevant topics: poor Haldir, having to kill for the (lusty) pleasure of his captors! Yes, poor Haldir, and once more, how wonderfully awful. ;-) I like that Legolas and Haldir have become fast friends, which would be quite normal given they are the only two of their kind in the cells, unless you have something up your collective sleeves. Will they fight again? Will they ever get out? My drunk ass will just have to wait to find out, eh?

Hugs!

mawgy and ash, a great combination! i m very much enjoying this story! just read the first three chapters and eagerly awaiting more. i really like haldir's natural sense of protectiveness for legolas and that the young prince has realised he must depend on this elf if they are to survive. now, it would indeed be a spectacle for thranduil and his warriors to come and destroy this foul place! thanks for starting a great tale!
cheers,
erobey

Oooh, a story with Legolas and Haldir!!! I am so thrilled! I love your story so far, and your characterization of them is wonderful. Please pair up these two! Please?

Yeah! Another great fic! Oh, and about the "man" thing. I looked back and actually only found one instance, and you used "boy.":

<“I believe you’ve helped me enough, already.” The boy spat angrily, before struggling to his feet on trembling limbs, his hands bracing himself against the cold rock.>

Can't wait for the next installment! I love Leggy! And Haldir. (And Faramir and Eowyn and Eomer and Frodo and Sam and Merry and Pippin, but they're not in this fic.)

Don't leave us hanging here too long! Nice work in Haldir's description of Lorien.

Okay, so I'll read anything that says 'Haldir'. I'm glad I did.

It's so cruel and mean! Brutal and lovely! It's so well written. It's so exciting.

I want more, more, more.

Sir Julien

What a brilliant plot. And how also very mean and cruel and lovely. :-) I loved this line, "as soon as Elvenly possible." I think you two meant, 'whether' instead of 'weather' in Ch. 3. Minor boo boo. This is a great story, and I am looking forward to reading more!

Morier