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I just discovered this story and love it. Haldir and Legolas's relationship is beautifully written and I like how you highlight the differences between elves and men. Glad there is more to come soon.

Ehh? How did I manage to miss an update? Odd that, but a good set of chapters nonetheless. I like the action scenes, your description is excellent. And I couldn't help but laugh at Haldir's fantasy in this last one, of course he would fantasize about action and escape. Kinky fella! Well done as usual can't wait for the next chapter, and any ensuing elf-smut that may come our way, of course, i realize that it may not be realistic, but I can still hope. Perhaps the pervy captors might wish to see some elf-on-elf action? It's possible! LOL great story, can't wait for an update (which hopefully I won't miss this time!)

Such a lovely update -hugs Legolas- he's so adorable

Oooh. Very nice indeed!
And now Legolas is a bit more experienced, and maybe they'll find a way out the next time they fight!
errr...you aren't letting them off all that easily, are you?

I COULD SO EASILY BITE OFF ALL OF MY FINGERNAILS RIGHT NOW! THE TENSION IS SO THICK, YOU COULD CUT IT WITH A KNIFE. YOU'VE DONE AN INCREDIBLE JOB OF DEPICTING THE RISING DREAD OUR HEROES MUST BE FEELING BEFORE THE FIGHT. I SINCERELY HOPE HALDIR ISN'T GOING TO LET THE FACT THAT HE ISN'T ROYALTY, STOP HIM FROM LETTING HIS FEELINGS FOR LEGOLAS SHOW. ANOTHER EXCELLENT CHAPTER!

HELL YES! AN UPDATE! WOOHOO!

LOL, as you can see I'm excited to see an update on this story, for a little while there I was getting concerned. Loved how that beautiful scene with Legolas and Haldir was followed by a dying man hacking up blood and phlem. That was beautiful too. Not. I really want some elf on elf sex ASAP, but I gotta hand it to you guys, you known what your're doing. Nobody who was nearly raped is going to willingly jump into bed with another so soon after. Maybe the men will force them to have hot, wild elf sex?

YAY!!!!!!!!!
An update! And I totally understand about being swamped! And I didn't mean to nag. Well...Pippin did, but.. anyway, I'm just happy we haven't been abandoned! Of course, now we're left hanging at a pivotal moment. Again. *sigh*
But wonderful interactions in this chapter! That was un-edited???? I don't believe you!

this is soo good! i LOVE it! i loved the bath scene, very well written. poor legolas! please update soon, cant wait for more!

*ahem* oooh, Mawgy! Ash! ... yooo hooo? Helloooooo?????????
Now, we all know that Ertia doesn't nag. She just doesn't. SOOOOO.... Samwise and Pippin shall do it for me.
Sam: "Now, a real fine mess we're in this time. Ash and Mawgy aren't updatin' at all!"
Pippin: "I see what you mean, Sam. I guess it's up to us to do something about it."
Sam: "Like what, Pip?"
Pippin: "Well, I think we should start by lighting these firecrackers under their desk."
Sam: "And confiscate their copies of "Return of the King"?
Pippin: "Exactly. And I suppose we should give them a deadline to meet as well....."

Haldir to the rescue! There is something very appealing about an ass-kicking Haldir. I am so relieved that poor Legolas is still alive! That was WAY to close!
Haldir's way of comforting didn't feel very comforting. Here is Legolas, feeling all guilty about being too 'weak' to defend himself, and then Haldir comes and reminds him that 'he musn't be weak now'. Irritating. I now he's got a point though... Never mind. I am at least starting to see a light in the end of the tunnel. I cant wait for them to get out of that stinking hell! The first thing I would do then is to get Legolas and Haldir a nice hot bath. They could help cleaning each other, and would get all relaxed and wet and...ok now I'm working myself up. Thank you for the bucket by the way. I promise I will use it well.