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for The old ways

by Britta

person Nina
schedule May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please, don't kill Haldir in this fiction.
person Britta
schedule May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HarHarHar!!
Maybe you will have to continue reading ......Tomorrow?!? But if you ask nicely, I might post another chapter tonight!
Karla
person Nina
schedule May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
There is still hope. haldir is still alive. Legolas must know it
person Aduial
schedule May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh thank the Valar and all their children! Someone else who didn't kill off Haldir! Is there anyone else who finds that scene in TT most upsetting? I almost threw a fit in the movie theatre! Anyways, this story is turning out much better than I originathouthought it would. I'm not much for mpreg, but this is quite interesting. Keep it up. ^_~

~Aduial
person passion lover
schedule May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HE'S ALIVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YES!
person Britta
schedule May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi, to you all of my lovely reviewers!
First of all Thank you, thank you, thank you.
Hence to the request of some of you I will try and change the fromat of the parts which I am writing right now. I do have to say however, it's going to be a while until you will actually see it. You see, the stroy is already 84 pages long and all the parts I am posting right now are already finished and betaed (by the most reliable and cute beta I know ! Namely KIKI!!!). But I promise to work on it. Enough babbling though, I guess you want me back writing more of The old ways. Yours Karla
person Quarble
schedule May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aside from some misplaced commas and some (mostly excusable) spelling errors, you have a really good fic here! Gah, I nearly cried when I thought Haldir had kicked the bucket, but now I'm all smiles :o) However, I do have one bone to pick with you: in chapter (I think) 27, you say that its Sauron's army attacking Helm's Deep, when we all know its Saruman's. Just thoug'd 'd let you know.

My suggestion for the upcomming chapter:

Aragorn: "Farewell, dear Haldir! You shall not have died in vain!"
Haldir: "I'm not quite dead, sir..."
Aragorn: "You shall not have been mortally wounded..."
Haldir: "I think I might pull through, sir."
Aragorn: "Fercryinoutloud! Won't you die already so I can shag your boyfriend?"

...just a thought :o)
Keep up the good work!
person Red Taxi
schedule May 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
been enjoying reading your stories.. -)
love anything to do with the pretty elves, namely Haldir and Legolas!!

'ld fool thranduil, at least he allowed them to get married... sigh

uh, wonder how the baby will look like? +)
person Nina
schedule May 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good chapters! I wonder why they fall apart.
person Lady of Legolas
schedule May 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I know I read this before but is there someting you can do about the format?In consideration for others who haven't read this.