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for The old ways

by Britta

person Anon
schedule December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey, just a interesting note. You mention in chapter 95 that men can't produce breastmilk, but it has been known to happen. Here is one webpage that i found a while back. You story reminded me. http://www.unassistedchildbirth.com/milkmen.htm

truth is stranger than fiction ;)
person dinah47
schedule December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Why did you kill Haldir off - JRRT didn't but PJ did. Why must everyone else follow the same lead? The story was good (even though I am not crazy about slash) up to Helm's Deep. Don't know if I want to finish it now.

Dinah
person HHS
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Say,when the babies are born,are Orophin and Rumil going to be there for Haldir?I mean,Legolas' father,Thranduil is there already but what about Haldir's brothers?Are they not going to be in the picture?
person louise_oblique
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
very good
:)
huggs
louise
person Squall
schedule November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*smiles* I love this story...I so want Hal to pass out when he sees Lego giving birth. That would be so funny...But how ever you do it will be great. ^_^
person giggle
schedule November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Glad you are back.
I enjoy this story so much. It is sweet to see a thoroughly domesticated couple of elves awaiting their family.
I also like Thranduil. He must be very excited to be a grandfather he is even working alongside the dwarves.
Legolas seems to have a really hair trigger temper while he's pregnant. I like seeing guys suffer through pregnancies even if it is just fantasy. Can't wait for labor to start.
Thanks for a new chapter and I look forward to lots more. giggle
person louise_oblique
schedule November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was lovely i esspecially liked it with legolas stealing the sheets, lol. very sweet chapter well done


huggs
louise
person OMG
schedule November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!! This is the longest story ever. I'll be 100,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 when I finish it!! I'm scared to start! Your a good writer
person OMG
schedule November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!! This is the longest story ever. I'll be 100,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 when I finish it!! I'm scared to start! Your a good writer
person Vuaryn
schedule November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see that you are back at the writing block. I love the little encounter with Torkin....nice piece of work there. Hey, I miss your emails. Email me.....and I can't wait to read what you have next. When is Legolas going to deliver? Man, he has two in him....that's going to be huge!!!!