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December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Rah!!! Why did this end right now?!?!?!?!
Ok.
Calm down.
I fucking loved that! :D
Now I'm off for a very very cold shower...
Ok.
Calm down.
I fucking loved that! :D
Now I'm off for a very very cold shower...
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July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not sure what to say other than that I thought it was good
~BlackCat9~
~BlackCat9~
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July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*snorts* That's too great. Down with The Bitch!!! I can never get enough Orli/Lij. Yum. XD
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March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. Hope to one day see it continued.
Don't know where you got the name Natalie, by the way, but God, why is every girl I despise named Natalie?! :)
Anyway, absolutely great story. Rock on.
Don't know where you got the name Natalie, by the way, but God, why is every girl I despise named Natalie?! :)
Anyway, absolutely great story. Rock on.
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July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
PERFECT! WONDERFUL! I LUV IT! especialy
the last lines...
“Fine, so we’re both looking.†Elijah started
to draw circles on Orli’s knee with his index finger.
Orli closed his eyes. “But now I want to touch.â€
Woah, im in aw, its extremly well writin. I must leave now
Bye~
Jade
the last lines...
“Fine, so we’re both looking.†Elijah started
to draw circles on Orli’s knee with his index finger.
Orli closed his eyes. “But now I want to touch.â€
Woah, im in aw, its extremly well writin. I must leave now
Bye~
Jade
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May 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I don't think it was stupid at all. I thought it was very good. It had jealousy. Very good thing especially when it jealousy over Orlando. And I love your description of The Bitch. Very funny.
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May 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I feel the need to repeat previous comments so others can read 'em!
I really resent straight girls in RPS (not them being written, just them getting their hands on the boys) and you made Cynthia so incredibly despicable! Hating her is sinful pleasure.
I really resent straight girls in RPS (not them being written, just them getting their hands on the boys) and you made Cynthia so incredibly despicable! Hating her is sinful pleasure.
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May 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another review... this is so sweet. I lurve Orlijah. It's just... *happy sigh*
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May 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
"but now I want to touch"
~melt~
~cheers when The Bitch leaves~ LijOrli... Much better. :) um, so I have nothing really useful to say pt tpt thanks for sharing that and yummm
~melt~
~cheers when The Bitch leaves~ LijOrli... Much better. :) um, so I have nothing really useful to say pt tpt thanks for sharing that and yummm