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for Haldir's Nightmare

by Malthenel

person Anon
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
elves carry for a whole year. that's why they celebrate their begetting day, 'cause it's the same day they were conceived.
person HHS
schedule December 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor Elladan!Well,at least he has Estel,I think.
person Geek
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Whilst i like this story.. i have to agree with your beta.. it does look incestuous... okay so they are adopted.. then you need to say that... in the story...
otherwise i'm quite enjoying it... Haldir's a little too wimpy maybe.. thatthat might well be the hormones...LOL


person HHS
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor Elladan having no lovelife!Can you give him someone so he won't be lonely?
person Mirasaui
schedule October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have been guilty of reading your story and not leaving a review! Just wanted to let you know how much I am enjoying it. Haldir, Legolas, and Elrohir all pregnant at the same time-hehe! Hope Haldir is not going to have serious problems. Look forward to future chapters!

Mirasaui
person Lady of Legolas
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So whoe ise is pregnant now?More mpregnancies!!!
person Iamme
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Cliffies are not nice!! What happens to poor Hal!!
person ArchNemesis
schedule October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, no! don't let anythinppenppen to Haldir's baby. That would just be cruel after everything that he's been through. Celeborn would just flip. Excellent! Can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon!

Nemesis ^_~
person Slash Goddes
schedule September 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe Haldir Legolas and Elrohir pregnant whahaha.Ok anyway i like the story.More please
person Morgana le Fay
schedule September 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
I like this story Haldir's nightmare vry much, and I think it's written very good, but I would like to have translations for the elven words! Thanks! Go on!