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for Lonely Hearts

by ihgs123

person Lady of Legolas
schedule September 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I hope that if Erestor(& it will be him)does gets pregnant,it will be twins.At least I hope so.And as for Huor and Semar,just do it!MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!For them too.
person Amelie (AP)
schedule August 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm so proud, my first beta-ing! It didn't even turn out that bad! Yay! BTW, the stories great too... (Just kidding, the story dwarfs my happiness over beta-ing)
person Summer
schedule August 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love it,I want some more of it.I started reading your chapters like hour ago and I am already hooked.Please more,and make it soon.Already checking if you ued ^ed ^sigh^
person Pookie
schedule August 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooo!

You updated!

ack, I don't know if I can take waiting for the next bit!

I'm glad Glorfy woke up, and I hope he accepts what Erestor gave up for him.

update soon please!!
person Teri
schedule August 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please don't take so long for the next chapter. This is a great story line and you are doing so well.
Take Care,
Teri
person Cally
schedule July 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi,

I know this isn't a review, or possibly all that nice. But I love Erestor/Glorfindel, and I stumbled upon this story and would very much love to read it. But I cannot make it past the first paragraph becouse of the punctuation mistakes. Is there any way you would possibly send it to a beta and upload it again? Or send it to me when they have been fixed?

Cally
person Lady of Legolas
schedule June 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor Huor.I hope that they will find out that it was Valandil who stabbed him.Now as for Semar's "feelings" for Huor,like some people says,opposites can attract each other.KUDOS!!!
person Devious
schedule May 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please more
person TJ
schedule April 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well done. Start is rather fast-paced and character oriented but I like that.
Next chapters could slow down a bit and add more descriptive detail without drowning in detail of course.
Looking forward to the next chapters.
person Losi
schedule April 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This looks like a great story so far, I hope you continue it quickly!