rate_review Reviews

Please feed your muse some vitamins. Your readers don't want your muse to be collapsing on you. Poor Elrond, falling apart at the imminent arrival of Arthron. In this chapter, I liked Huor much better since he is not teasing Semar out of being nasty etc. What is happening with Elrohir and Elladan?

The added love story with Elrond sounds interesting. His future mate sounds like one tough icy elf. You have so many love stories going on now, but I enjoy reading them all. I'm glad Haldir regrets his mistake, and hopefully he can be faithful to Stinah now. I think Semar is so sweet and caring. Hopefully while still recovering fris wis wound, Huor will see how special Semar is and what genuine feelings Semar has for him.

Another chapter to read and so soon, wow! Glad Erestor was straight forward about his love for Glorfindel and wanting to know if Glorfindel could ever return his feelings. Feel so bad for Stinah with his broken heart . Valandil gets around a lot of beds. All those years ago, Haldir was honest that he was not the faithful type. Hope he has changed. Don't want to see Stinah betrayed and heart broken again.

Oh, you are the sly one. Okay, "Please," I am begging for more. Please to the gods of Arda...make Kiki write more. :):)
Take Care,
Teri

Hmmm I am the sly one.Aren't I *gigles.The eighteen is ready to roll but post it I shall, hmm I dunno when.Thank's for encoraging Rev's ya'll.It keeps the girl like me typing.lol

Absolutely faster!
Most expeditiously, please! You should post
the next chapter at breakneck, brisk, chop chop,
double time, lickety-split, and posthaste! In other words ...
More please and swiftly!!! Umm ... Love the story!

More please! Update soon please! Thought Huor seemed nicer in the earlier chapters. In the later ones, he seems rather cynical and manipulative. Selmar seems too nice for him. Another love story added with Haldir - great! Shame on Haldir for cheating. Wonder if Elladan is appreciating Elrohir more now since Elladan seems to want him close. What's been happening with Erestor and Glorfindel?

WOW!!!Your muse must be cooperating.Damn Haldir!

Hello Kiki,
Yes, I would like it very much if you would write more of this story and faster. I have been waiting for so long. The parallel stories of Erestor/Glorfindel and Huor/Semar are wonderful. Valendil's death was well deserved (I feel terrible saying that), but he was very nearly a kinslayer. Now, I have to see how Semar gets Huor to love him back. Elladan is fading and I want to see how it is he comes back or who brings him back. He does come back, right? There is no doubt in my mind that Glorfindel will love Erestor. Please, I need more.
Thank you,
Teri

Ok,sweetheart.You need to post more of this smut.Huor is my favourite in this story.He rules.