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for Lonely Hearts

by ihgs123

person Twilight
schedule December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay, another chapter! Keep feeding those sweets to your muse. tor\tor's and Glorfindel's discussion about Arthon's breakfast visit was funny. Having to be nice to unpleasant relatives comes with being bonded. Nice playful banter between the two.

Nice scene with Semar and Huor. Wondering if Huor was as affected by that kiss as Semar was. Even with his vast experience, hope so.
person HHS
schedule December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I feel sorry for Semar because he might suffer a heartbreak if Huor is really only playing with his feelings.But I hope that there will be more of Haldir and Stinah.Will they ever reconcile?You're doing a great job kiki!
person Twilight
schedule December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What an interesting twist that Arthon loved Elrond all those many ages ago. Guess he was so mean to Elrond out of frustration and jealousy all of those years ago? With Gil-galaad out of the picture, why is Arthon still so angry and nasty to Elrond? Did Elrond become Gil-galaad's lover even though he had a crush or feelings for Arthon?

With Stinah staying in his room (if he stays that is), Haldir will need to make the most of his opportunity to gain Stinah's trust and love back.
person HHS
schedule December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So what's stopping Arthon from telling Elrond on what happened int he past?His pride?To hell with it!I just hope that don't kill each other.As for Haldir and Stinah,they still do love each other.Ai,both of them are stubborn!!!More!!!
person HHS
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Noble indeed!A noble shouldn't be acting that way.And to think that he's already acting as if he was the ruler of Imladris.
person Twilight
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another chapter, yay! A very happy reader here. Yay, Elladan and Elrohir are back. How fortunate Haldir and Elrohir was there to get Arthon off of Elrond. Looking forward to Stinah and Haldir meeting up in your next chapter.
person louise_oblique
schedule November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic!!!!!!!! love it

huggs
louise
person Twilight
schedule November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm very happy to see another chapter and so quickly too. Hope your updates will not be as rare as you indicated in your A/N. There are so many Elves that I want to know what is happening with them. And now, we have poor Elrond being sat upon by his arrogant and ill-tempered future husband. Please come back to this story as soon as possible!!
person Devious
schedule November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What is Arthon's problem.Kik,i where did you dig that elf out from.He is so rude,but I think at the end Elronll cll change him.That elf needs to be changed.And pliz pliz don't work on the other stories yet.I want more of LH.Pliz
person HHS
schedule November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
NNNNOOOO!!!!!Your muse cannot get away again!I got my big net ready.How about a big shotgun to make them stay!?