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May 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I certainly would give you a five star for the scenes with Glorfindel and Legolas. I would try to find a beta who has
excellent skills in grammar to give you story more polish. Please don't ever get discouraged! You have great skill
in presenting characters feelings and scenes. The story flows along and, even more important, you make the reader
*care* about what happens to Legolas. I've been disgusted and quit reading some of the "five star" stories on this site
because they consisted of nothing but unrealistic, totally exaggerated and absolutely impossible torture. Flesh and
blood can only recover from so much. Too much or too great torture results in death. Keep writing.
excellent skills in grammar to give you story more polish. Please don't ever get discouraged! You have great skill
in presenting characters feelings and scenes. The story flows along and, even more important, you make the reader
*care* about what happens to Legolas. I've been disgusted and quit reading some of the "five star" stories on this site
because they consisted of nothing but unrealistic, totally exaggerated and absolutely impossible torture. Flesh and
blood can only recover from so much. Too much or too great torture results in death. Keep writing.
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May 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooh i knew it!! i knew someone will find them like this! This must be one of the brothers ahhh this will finish bad for both Legolas and Glorfindel :( waaah please update soon i can't wait to see what will happen next though i have some idea of it in my head...
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May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
uh, such a cliff hanger!
glad the nordor lord and sindarin prince found comfort and love in each other,
well, whatever the consequences might be...
was that alderios who opened the door?..
glad the nordor lord and sindarin prince found comfort and love in each other,
well, whatever the consequences might be...
was that alderios who opened the door?..
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May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a cruel Cliffie.
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May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my Valar?!He loves Legolas!?Dagnabit!!!Who interrupted them?Who?
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May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh dear.. your story is amazing! i like it... (although i'm begginning to pity legolas...)
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May 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Now I wonder if Thranduil will release Glorfindel to avoid a war?Whatit ait about the Noldor and the Sindar?Can't they all just get along?
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May 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You have a *great* plot here, but the grammer and spelling mistakes really detract from the story. Were things just cleaned up a bit, I think "In The Name Of Faith" would be nothing short of fantastic. Keep up the good work, but please, watch your tenses!
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May 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Why is it that no one will stand-up for Legolas?Somebody save them both!!!
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May 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
a dark fic like I love them! ^^