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December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please writie the sequal soon, I love this story sooo much
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November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was a great scene, the lovemaking. Wonderful story, wonderful at all! I am so sad it is over... You should write the story you are planning, it would be great!!! Thanks for sharing In the name of faith.
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November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading your story for a while, both here and on the Library of Moria site. I liked it a lot, though I'm just getting around to reviewing it. I do adore stories that use Glorfindel as a major character and you certainly made him appealing.
If you're still looking for a beta, I wouldn't mind helping out. It's been a while since I've read , so, so I won't be too useful in critiquing some of your takes on elvish ways; BUT I'm a pretty good beta when it comes to language and grammar. I was on yearbook staff all through high school and part of college, so I'm quite experienced in proofreading and editing other people's work.
My email's diana@impolite.org if you're interested. =)
If you're still looking for a beta, I wouldn't mind helping out. It's been a while since I've read , so, so I won't be too useful in critiquing some of your takes on elvish ways; BUT I'm a pretty good beta when it comes to language and grammar. I was on yearbook staff all through high school and part of college, so I'm quite experienced in proofreading and editing other people's work.
My email's diana@impolite.org if you're interested. =)
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November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Couldn't ask for a better ending to a wonderful story. I truly enjoyed this one! Thank you for sharing.
Mirasaui
Mirasaui
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November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*taking cold shower* Don't worry, this chapter makes up for aaaaaaaaaaaall the cliffies... except for that one with the fight... that was just wrong.
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November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! loved it
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November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, the Elves are surely OOC, and the language needs work. Despite the flaws, however, I could not stop reading this fic. Glorfindel was magnificent, in battle and in love, and I was pleased at the happy ending. Now, please have a care, and carefully consider your sequel; it does not seem to make sense to make the Noldor the bad guys.
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November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yes, Glorfindel, make love to him! Hehehe... but please, keep Acids on your mind as you do so ;)
Hey Acids, I wasn't aware that this chapter was up! I'm so deprived... but I guess now I don't have to wait as long for the next part, eh?
Chat with ya later!
Cheers,
X
Hey Acids, I wasn't aware that this chapter was up! I'm so deprived... but I guess now I don't have to wait as long for the next part, eh?
Chat with ya later!
Cheers,
X
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November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i love this story, please continue it soon
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October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooooooooooooOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! how dare you end the chapter like that :'D I''m going to go insane! Pleas the the name of everything yaoi, update! I won't be able to servive*cries hysterically onto some random persons shoulder* *sniff* I loved this chapter though