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October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is great, although the emphasis marks annoyed me. Made it hard to read it properly. But it was good. E-mail is above.
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October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Whoops, didn't realize my e-mail wouldn't show up when I was logged in. Damn it. Here it is anyway.
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May 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
To quote Orlando: more, More! MOOOOORRREEE!!!!!!
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May 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Just when I think it can't get any more interesting it does. I loved this chapter especially the last paragraph (giggles) any way keep up update soon.
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May 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Pretty hot ending to Chapter 6... I'm all steamed up waiting to see what Lij is going to do!
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May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I'm putting a review in my own fic.
Actually I'm pointing out a funny typo I made in chapter 5:
“I know what *I* want to do about it.†A ridiculously stupid grin spread across Elijah’s face and we went to the chair and straddled Orli’s lap.
Can you see what I did wrong? Read the line a few times . . . it'll come to you. In the interim, I'm going to go and correc. I. I would hate to be MST'd on the basis of one wee little typo. [nod to my lovelies @ GayShaggingCats]
Cheers!
Lurve & Kishes,
Sonja.
PS: Thank you all for reading this! Feel free to flame me if you want. I could use a laugh. :o)
Actually I'm pointing out a funny typo I made in chapter 5:
“I know what *I* want to do about it.†A ridiculously stupid grin spread across Elijah’s face and we went to the chair and straddled Orli’s lap.
Can you see what I did wrong? Read the line a few times . . . it'll come to you. In the interim, I'm going to go and correc. I. I would hate to be MST'd on the basis of one wee little typo. [nod to my lovelies @ GayShaggingCats]
Cheers!
Lurve & Kishes,
Sonja.
PS: Thank you all for reading this! Feel free to flame me if you want. I could use a laugh. :o)
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May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Muuuuhhh.. *grin* I'm saying that a lot recently.
You hit my weak spot...Orlijah.. Roughly kising against a wall...Lijah in nothing but a t-shirt and boxers...
*drops down in a dead faint*
I love you!!
ET xxx
You hit my weak spot...Orlijah.. Roughly kising against a wall...Lijah in nothing but a t-shirt and boxers...
*drops down in a dead faint*
I love you!!
ET xxx
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May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh myyyy.
~regrouping after an unsuccessful attempt not to melt into a puddle~
Please continue, or I shall have to set Girls Aloud on you, (and we all know how irritating they are).. or worse... I'll sic Shelleybeanz on ya! ;)
~much pash, many snogs~
The Weeding Wonder (I hate gardening... ~siiiiigh~)
XXX
~regrouping after an unsuccessful attempt not to melt into a puddle~
Please continue, or I shall have to set Girls Aloud on you, (and we all know how irritating they are).. or worse... I'll sic Shelleybeanz on ya! ;)
~much pash, many snogs~
The Weeding Wonder (I hate gardening... ~siiiiigh~)
XXX
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May 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Silly me for forgetting to check for updates on this!!! It's great. I love the arguing, tres sexi. I have these two guy friends from Iowa, I'll be forced tomorrow tst bst blurt 'you're from iowa?' and have them give me weird looks.
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May 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I still love this story...
When I clicked on the + next to the chapter selection menu it looked like I could post the next chapter if I wanted. Surely that wouldn't actually work? If it did, I could make this story go any way I liked... :D
When I clicked on the + next to the chapter selection menu it looked like I could post the next chapter if I wanted. Surely that wouldn't actually work? If it did, I could make this story go any way I liked... :D