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by bleueyes

person Veronica
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was fantastic! You made them both so sweet and lovey, oh my! Love and angst, UGH.... the pain! So beautious!
person Jacquie
schedule November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! Hot stuff! Thanks ever so much for posting this! :-)
person Lily
schedule November 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i loved this story...brilliant details and the personalities were dead on...brilliant job, love...cheers!