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by peniel

person peniel
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hee, I couldn't get a mail to you, so I do it like this, hoping you somehow manage to read it.
The sentence is unclear because somehow the word 'you' is missing:
I've loved -you- since you rode up to us for the first time, Celebrían holding Arwen.

Hope it's ok now?
Peniel
person lynn
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BEautiful! really! i loved it!

i just couldnt for the life of me understand what you meant with this sentence it's a little unclear : /I’ve loved since you rode up to us for the first time, Celebrían holding Arwen./

I'd appriciate a reply.

*Hugs*

Lynn