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person Anon
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i know its hard to write quickly but please continue as quickly as possible!!
person daughterofthemidnightmoon
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHH!!! Hurry with more NOW!!! That chapter was awesome, though a little sad... Five years? Valar... I think Haldir and Gildor LIKE to be miserable if they act like that. Are they going to meet each other agan next chapter? Oh, I hope, i hope, i hope... I don't know if I can stand the sspense of waiting for another chapter and it only being a transition chapter. :( HURRY WITH MORE SOON! I'm dying here! I can't weait until they get back together. I get the feeling there's going to be a lot of hot words and tears whenever they do. Probably a lot of guilt and regret too... Did I mention yet that you should hurry with another update... like NOW! ^_^ Do hurry with more soon! I'll be waiting!

-daughter of the midnight moon
person Lioncourt
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm relieved you put in that sweet scene with Mala. It was just as adorable and heartwarming, as the rest of the chapter was angsty and heartbreaking. I dont think I would have survived without it. Gildor singing...*sigh* Oh,I think I have fallen in love with him all over again! You know, the thought of the twins shagging Gildor made me furious for some reason. I wonder why. Maybe I'm starting to feel a bit possessive... *don't you DARE touch him, he's MINE*
person Lioncourt
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And THANK YOU for updating!!!
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I'm a horrible reviewer, but I've been following your fics and greedily awaiting every update =) I liked your use of different POV's in this last chapter-- sometimes it helps to see the character's situations from another's POV. I hope Haldir and Gildor will kiss and make up, but I'm sure you have just a little more agst in store for us ;) Keep up the great work and keep those updates coming!
person Shanna
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am happy for reading a new chapter of this wonderful story. I am wishing to know what is going to happen, if Gildor and Haldir were soon... A greeting Ryo.
person Anon
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please tell me you are going to do a part 3 - please don't leave them like that!!
person HHS
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
They're not back together yet?!Stubborn elves!
person Giggles
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I can take much more of this!! I want them together and happy. The last chapter did me in. I hate seeing both of them so miserable!!! Please get them back together soon!!!!!!

I've really enjoyed these two stories. You're a very talented writer.
person Minuial Nuwing
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
**head=>desk** They both need to be beaten senseless by someone who knows how, then locked in a room together until they make up.
Silly, silly elves...I'm not sure which I would shake first! **grin**

Lovely chapter, Ryo!

**hugs**
Min ;) **who is still waiting for her happy ending...tap, tap, tap**