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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a sweet little story! I very much enjoyed this. I like a story with *plot*, thank you, and your charicterizations were good.
You might want to come back and fix it up a bit. There are some words that have gotten corrupted in the changeover, and you appear to be someone who actually cares about grammar and spelling.
You might want to come back and fix it up a bit. There are some words that have gotten corrupted in the changeover, and you appear to be someone who actually cares about grammar and spelling.
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September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YEY FOR LIJAHDOM! WHOOP WHOOP! *Dances* they are so FEW lijahdoms on this website.. i was quite shocked. This was great though.
you shouldve stuck the lemon in there though. I thought it was going to continue on into the next chapter but it didnt (as you would know -.-) but i still liked it.
Lmfao @ the Dom-hitting-on-Billy- thing. AND Billy in a pink jacket *snicker* Oh i can see it now...
Great fic! ^_^
you shouldve stuck the lemon in there though. I thought it was going to continue on into the next chapter but it didnt (as you would know -.-) but i still liked it.
Lmfao @ the Dom-hitting-on-Billy- thing. AND Billy in a pink jacket *snicker* Oh i can see it now...
Great fic! ^_^
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! It was funny, sexy and hot. You have to add more soon. This is just too good to leave it as is.
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG I love that story so much. It was too cute and your an awesome writer. Adorable and hot i couldnt want more in a story.