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September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The spelling was really bad, I couldn't understand most of it. I really want to read this but it's more work then it's worth. Try correcting some stuff and reloading it up. Thanks, Antidaeophobia
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June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ouch!!!! You really need a beta or to at least proofread what you write before you post it. The story has potential but all the misspellings and grammatical errors make it actually painful to attempt to read. Find yourself a good beta. There are tons of people out there willing to help aspiring authors improve.
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June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If any one out there would like to be my beta please e-mail me!