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OK, I have a certain sneaking affection for mpreg stories. I admit it! (grin) And I like even better when they have Legolas in them as the preggie one, and I actually sometimes like submissive Legolas stories. And I love Glorfindel. You have all four elements: Mpreg, submissive pregnLegoLegolas, and Glorfindel is the father.... Love it.

You also have a charming writing style that I like very much, and the storyline is sufficiently engaging as to keep my interest and make me want more. MORE! Please! (grin)

I'm sorry Legolas's fatis ais a meanie, because I do like Thranduil a lot... still, there's no other sensible way of getting Legolas to Imladris save by banishment, so I guess I'll handle it somehow. I do worry a LOT what will happen when inevitably, something happens to let Glorfindel or Elrond know this is not a little Sindar stableboy named Anestel, but in fact is the son of Thranduil and a young prince named Legolas.... Will they be angry? Will Legolas suffer for it? Or will they be secretly pleased, knowing that now Glorfindel's heir will have a much higher lineage than they thought it would? And will they use the information as a weapon against Thranduil, who is, after all, their enemy?

I actually had a dream about this story last night. That should tell you how much I am enjoying it. (grin) In the dream, Legolas was attacked and ravished by the Twins, who excused their behaviour because Glorfindel allows everyone to call Anestel a whore... he is injured during the ravishment and left to wander alone in the woods, but eventually they find him and the truth comes out. While Anestel/Legolas is sleeping in Glorfindel's arms, drugged and supposed to be resting, he starts talking in his sleep--and the secret comes out! But when he is awake and Glorfindel questions him about it, the youngster told him his father forbade him to ever use his birth name because his mother had died giving birth to Legolas.... so in essence he did not lie to Glorfindel. What a strange dream!!

Anyway, I'll shut up now, except to tell you I am enjoying your story very much, and look forward to a continuat I I check a couple times a day... (whimper...) I hope there will be an update soon!

Thank you for a good story.

Seriously,what's up with Glorfindel?

Hello :)
I hardly ever enjoy reading fic that much! Great job. Very angsty (IMHO) and confusing. I mean Legolas 'enjoying' the wlorflorfinfdel beats him. Hmm... I loved it. And I can't wait to read more. I never dared to hope I might enjoy mpreg but you showed that it's possible. Thank you!

Kit: That's cruel and unusual punishment. I COULD
HAVE YOU ARRESTED!!
Kathy: .... No you c.
K.
Kit: =^_^;; I wouldn't really want to anyways, I'm too
eager to see the next part! Maybe if I use the scanner
at the library and send her the pic, it'll motivate her!
Kathy: Ri-ight. ...No. Even if his legs block it, he's still
naked from the waist down.
Kit: Drat. Who do we know that has a scanner?
Kathy: *smirk* Your parents.
Kit: =o_0= Umm... that's COMPLETELY out of the
question... Maybe...
Kathy: This is getting a little long... Bai!
Kit: Hey wait! I'm do- do-

I'm shameless down on me knees begging for more! Keep writing and update soon! (big puppy eyes)

I love your story!! It is funny and yet very interesting. I can't wait for more. What will the baby be, will Legolas ever learn to hate Glorifindel? I know you can't answer but...... please hurry.
Your True Fan
Amanda

Well,Ch. 10 was even nicer than the precious ones.Poor Legolas.But why do I hthe the feeling that he begins to enjoy that way of life?
PLease update soon.

Dagnabit!!! So Glorfindel is still treating Legolas as a possession?More please.

Kitsune: =^_^= YAY! I've been waiting the the next part of this!
Katherine: You had something else you wanted to add?
Kit: Erm, you know, not really, no.
Kathy: *poke poke* Say it!
Kit: Alright already...... um... well..... you see, I got bored one day, and after I read your story
I got kinda inspired for a pic - the scene where Legolas is sitting by the window in only Glorfindel's
tunic... and.. um... if you want, you can e-mail me, and I'll try to send it to you... *blushes* I'm
not an artist or anything, so it's not that good...
Kathy: The only part about it that's not well drawn is the fact that he looks like a girl.
Kit: HE DOES NOT! Why do people keep telling me that?!
Kathy: Because he does.
Kit: Whatever! ... Anyways, yeah... just thought you'd like to know....
Ciao!

It just keeps getting better and better. You'riviriving me mad wondering what's going to happen! But please, update soon, with more Legolas angst. You are such an amazing writer.

But I'm still hoping for a happy end (hint hint).