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by Esteliel

person Lady of Legolas
schedule February 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to ask something.Okay,there was or still is a conflict between Mirkwood and the Noldor.What really started the conflict and who threw the first punch,arrow or whatever?And I'll ask this again,will Glorfindel ever love Legolas or at t bet be nicer to him?As for Legolas,what is his reason for being so submissive to Glorfindel or the other Noldor for that matter?He's a prince and he just gave himself to Glorfindel to do as he pleases just because he got pregnant by him?Me thinks that there is an alterior motive(or I'm embarassing myself)for Legolas to give himself to Glorfindel.There's a soon-to-be-born child involve in this mess and I don't think that child to suffer the consequences.Poor Leggy!!!Hugs and kisses for him.
person Elflover
schedule February 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I wanted to add a couple of thoughts to the above.

We know that all the other Elves want Legolas for their amusement and/or revenge, and Glorfindel has denied them this. Haldir seems so hungry, that you have to wonder if he is going to try something anyway. (I doubt that Elladan would... he has to live in the same household as Glorfindel, after all, and would have to respect him as tutor and his father's friend. These constraints don't apply to Haldir, and Haldir seems to very much have a personal malice against Legolas and his family.)

One thing that wasn't explained was just how Haldir knew Legolas by sight. Had he been to Thranduil's court as an envoy from Lorien? (Do they even have diplomatic relations, given the "conflict", whose exact scope and nature is still vague Or Or is it the case that Haldir, and perhaps his brothers, were one of those patrols taken by force, and Haldir eventually managed to escape? (Maybe his brothers are still Thranduil's unwilling "guests"?)
person Glorfindel
schedule February 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very very very good..... this threat will darken the mind of POOOOOR Leggy for months....!
And yes, Glorfindel likes to force somebody to talk about sex... willingly or not, "somebody" in MY real life could affirm this *evil smile*

continue, Esteliel. I beg you, not on my knees, of course ;-), but I am eager to read MORE!
person Viconiaa
schedule February 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm really sorry for your poor, aching fingers but it doesn't change the fact that I'm SOOOOOO happy because of your quick update! Poor Legolas - he's such aard.ard. And Glorfindel is SOOOOOO evil! I love that, but I hope there'll be the happy ending.... but not too soon. :)
person Nosila
schedule February 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh God! This is almost too angsty to read. I love it. And poor Legolas! Please update soon.
schedule February 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey please add more! lol I really love this fic, and wish to see what happens with poor lil' Legolas. Keep up the good work! Ja'ne!
person Viconiaa
schedule February 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another chapter? So soon? GREAT! I hope that the next chapter will be a little bit longer... Please, please, pretty please?!?
person Lady of Legolas
schedule February 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Damn ff.net hasn't uploaded the new chapter yet.Okay,I'm here anyway.As I re-read the previous chapters,something came to mind.They talked about a conflict that happened between Thranduil's people and the Noldor.What was the cause of the conflict?I seriously want to know.
person Glorfindel
schedule February 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
He finally gave up....? He SIMPLY gave up....?

This is too easy. I don't believe the little princling. ;-)
person JastaElf
schedule February 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OK, I am thoroughly confused, at this point. I had a feeling, given Glorfindel's almost non-reaction to the news, that he was not as angry as the others were.... after all, it is to his advantage that Legolas is a Prince and not a stable-boy. (grin) But I did get the feeling, from his reaction (or lack thereof) that he was very unhappy... and that Legolas was going to suffer for it, because he had lied to Glorfindel. Instead, some very calm and sensible planning goes on--then Glorfindel returns to his chamber and acts in a very loving manner with the terrified young Prince.

I do not think Legolas really has any plans up his sleeve, but I could be wrong. I think though that he has simply given in because he realizes there are forces at work here that are more powerful than he is--and that if he is to salvage the life and existence of his child, he needs to give in.

Still... there is the simple fact that Glorfindel loves it when Legolas is naughty and talks back or defines him... and gets hard and randy the moment the punishment starts... then immediately forgives and takes Legolas back into his arms. CLASSIC dom/sub stuff, and very nicely done...

You have me completely hooked by this story. (grin) Please, please, I beg of you, let there be another new chapter soon....