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Celeirdúr..I like him, a lot.

And this story, too. It\errierribly fascinating.

Excellent chapter..... I had been wondering if Glorfindel would turn Legolas' brother over to Haldir, and if so, what justification he could possibly use (other than punishment for his cruelty towards Legolas), that wouldn't screw up the hostage plans.

It is gratifying to see some small amount of concern for Legolas on Glorfindel's part (though it was also distressing the way he set Legolas up, and used him in front of his brother).

Need I say, please continue?

grrrr. mean MEAN glorfindel. i've actually only read the first few paragraphs, but i had to get that off my chest. PLEASE say he gets nicer? must go read the rest of it now. yay!

I think that Cereduir should get preggy with Elladan child,so he can see what it's like to walk in Legolas shoes.Whooopsie where did I get that idea.Heh.LOL

So,it's Celeidur's turn to be hurt?It' not nice but serves him right for not defending his younger brother.But you know,it's showing that the Noldor is much more cruel than the Sindar.It's like what ever happened to their people in Thranduil's hands,they do it to the Sindar.Well,violence begets violence and no matter what they do to Legolas' brother,it most certainly will give Thranduil the reason to start a war with the Noldor.Too bad because I thought that the Noldor wants peace with the Sindar.Keep them coming please.

Wow, this is amazing! I've been reading this story for a week or two now, and I still can't believe how wonderful it is. You have done an amazing job taking something most would laugh at (male pregnancy) and turned it into a fully believeable aspect. My one thing is: When will we find out the sex of the baby?! It's driving me nuts waiting! Anyway, keep up the good work, and write, write, write!
Thanks so much,
Esy

What a nice and fluffy chapter... :-) but I personally think Legolas didn't suffer enough... *evil smile* the idea Haldir is in the same room when ---- you know *g* --- is VERY nice, too. You should write it.

What about Thranduil? If I were him, I would declare war! ;-)

A masterpiece, nethertheless. But too much chocolate makes Glorfindel lazy. Eat some hot spiced tacos next time if you write the next chapter!

With the famous evil smile you know... your Glorfindel ;-); the one who always wants MORE....!

Part 17...

*moan*

It just gets worse and worse....

Why do I think that evil, vile Glorfindel is going to make good on his threat (or fantasy, or whatever).... To flaunt his mastery over Legolas, while taunting and tormenting Haldir at the same time.... What a power rush that would be for him!

Such degradation for Legolas..... *moan*

You realize that your readers (some of them, anyhow) are suffering right along with Legolas, don't you??? Cruel, wicked author....

It is too much to hope for any kind of happy ending now.... other than for vile Glorfindel.

We readers must grit our teeth and strengthen ourselves, to see this through to the bitter end.

NEXT CHAPTER, PLEASE!

Legolas is still acting as Glorfindel's sex slave?When will it end?

Little baby is moving inside=*squueeeee soooo cute.I still hate Glory though,coz he's taunting Leggy every time he got chance.Glory doesn't deserve to be father of Leggy's child.