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by Esteliel

person Kitsune Hashiba
schedule March 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
KAWAII! Yay! Glorfindel really does care for his little 'Lass. *waits faithfully for the next chappie*
person JastaElf
schedule March 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Let's try this again.... ;-)

I'm SO glad you're back, and hopefully feeling better!! We were worried about you. It's good to have tou back--and good to see another chapter!

I feel as if the political situation is getting wrapped up WAY too quickly and conveniently... but I'm not too discomfited by that, because I really care more about what's happening with Legolas and Glorfindel. I am VERY worried about the poor youngling and his baby, who is insisting apparently on coming NOW... with great pain and hurting...

And yes, it does seem as if Glorfindel is more than a little upset over the thought of losing Legolas--not because he is a possession, but because Glorfindel cares about him. That is nice to see.

Kind of spooky to consider what must happen for Legolas to give birth...

I hope there will be more soon!! Welcome back!
person Bungie
schedule March 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story !!!! you have to finish it. Pretty please
with wipped cream and elves on top?!?
person kiki
schedule March 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh,I hope you get better Esteliel.I'll sing you get a well song,so you can recover and write more of your wonderful chapies.*ahem*clears throat*HEre it comes:"I hope you get well`tandan tandan"So you can write more Anestel"tandan tandan.Wait that doesn't rhyme.*blushes *(sorry just off watching American Idol,kinda catches up with me)Keep em' comingLOL
person Lady of Legolas
schedule March 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Don't exert yourself man.We don't want you to have a relapse.It's good you're feeling better and please,take care of yourself.
person Eären
schedule March 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh you cannot leave it there! Hurry hurry with more. I cannot wait to see what happens next... Poor legolas.


Luv lots, Eären
person Elflover
schedule March 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Esteliel -- I'm sorry that you were/are sick, and glad that you are now starting to recover. (Guiltily glad, also, that the lack of postings wasn't (in)directly due to my comments....)

Looking forward to the updates, once you are well again!

person Esteliel
schedule March 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi everybody! :)
I'm sorry that there hasn't been a new chapter yet, I've caught the flu and lain in bed with fever for the last days -- the fever is gone now, but I've still got a terrible headache which prevents me from writing. I WANT to write, though... I hope I'll be able to update really soon. *sigh*
@elflover No, of course it weren't your comments!! I'm always happy about helpful criticism, and I really plan to come back to you about it -- once I'm able to sit at the pc for more than 5 minutes.

Thank you for your wonderful comments, everybody! :)
I think I'll return to my bed now and try to dream about elves. ;)
person crazy_she_elf
schedule March 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god esteliel i hope you get better soon!!! I really can't wait for the next chapter i'mcheking everyday but nothing and I got scared that something happend to you..it dd actualy

Anyway this is so addicting story I so love it and enjoy every chapter it's just the best I've ever read so please write us looooong chapter when you get back on the pc ;)
person Mainframe
schedule March 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is hot stuff! I have been reading it for a while now an realised that I had not reviewed it yet...sorry. I love the different take you have on the whole Mirkwood, Imladris elven war and that Legolas has unwittingly and through no fault of his own ended up at the center and PREGNANT?!!! Now that is a new on on me...yet surprisingly I find I like that too.

Glorfindel's character is truely an inigma to me, soft and caring one minute and harst and cruel the next, very confusing indeed, yet very captivating.

I look forward to the next instalment and apologise again for not reviewing before.

Jen

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