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every time I read this story I feel slightly sick and wish to strangle Glorifindel to death with my bare hands. I HATE him. yet I love poor little Las, you really are an exellent writer, and I do like this story but I find I can hardly read it I hate Glorifindel so, and reading Cuil Eden I wanted to slap Legolas and tell him he was not marrying that asshole. I think the addition of a challenger for glorifindel, other than Haldir would make things more intresting. and cause glorifindel delicious pain. I think at least part of your audience wants to torture glorifindel in some way, perhaps you do too? please?

While the story is very engaging, amusing and entertaining. The logic in it annoys me so much that I keep wondering if I should even bother. Glorfindel clearly took advantage of a young an inexperience elfling, but this was in no way punished, and he admits it himself that he forced himself on Legolas... Why does nobody care? Is rape common in your M-E? And why is not Legolas fading? Even with the child he is completely alone with a beast that thinks him nothing more then a warm hole to fill.... Especially now after he gave birth. Why is he still clinging to life? There's no logical reason. Nobody loves him as a human being. That's another thing, why do the elves of Imladris and Lothlorien complain about Thranduil's treatment his slaves and prisoner when they aren't even slightly better themselves. I thought elves through years of experience were at least intelligent but they're just fighting fire with fire. Why would any of them, perhaps especially Elrond, even think that hostilities would cease between them with their use of the Mirkwood Prince as a whore? Sort of disgusting really. They're all behaving like spoilt children.... *sigh* I wish you would reconsider some of the actions in this fic....

Cheers!

That was really good! I loved this story ^^
*continues to read - sequel*

wonderful I just love this story I did not at first but the more I read the more I liked it.. I still feel sorry of Lagloas I hope you make it better for him in the next story

Truly one of the best m-preg fics I've ever had the pleasure too read. My eyes was practically glued to the screen. Very good work!

Namo; If you don't have anything nice too say, you can f*** off and take your offending opinions with you.
Dont like it? - Dont read it!

You are a sick piece of shit who has made a total mockery of Tolkien with this pile of offal you call a fic.

Hello! I love your story!! Its one of the besgolagolas angst stories out there in my oponion. I hope you have more sequels after this and keep updating. You are a good write and should continue writing.

SEE YA!!

This story was quite intreging. You did a good job and your beta did fine work too, or maybe i am bias cause she a close friend. I truely love your story. It was at that point that i didn't want to know what would happen next but i could not put it down either.

That was very unexpected!! But I did like it :) The way Legolas spoke to that captain and yet later obeyed Glorfindel without a second thought, really showed our young elf is not as subdued as I thought him to be...also not as weak as I thought.
A good conclusion to your story.
I amtingting for the sequel and am busy reading the prequel!