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Oh wow. T's d's deep. Viggo's number one priority; protecting Orlando. And my heart sinks and my mind goes "awwwww!!!!" Can't wait for more.
Rutaari

WOW!!!!!!! you are one awesome writer!! thank you sooo much for sharing that story! it is absolutely fantastic!!
hehe, it's about 11pm right now and i was supposed to be in bed a half hour ago but... ah well!
anyway, back to my review, may i repeat, this story is wonderful!
god i live for orli torture and viggo angst!!!
yes i'm twisted,ehe!ehe!!! but i love it anyway!
thanks for adding something new to my library of stories floating around in my head that i pick out at random in the day to dream about!!
lol did that make sense at all? ignore that...
please please PLEASE update! this is one of the best viggorlis i have ever read and i MUST HAVE MORE!!!
PLEASE!!!!!!!!

*huggles*
litzy.

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I like you story. It's off to a good start . I can't wait to see where this story goes. I like the whole Viggo guilt think. I understand he feels bad because of the reasons he broke up with Orlando in the first place so I look forward to him dealing with the guilt of driving Orli into a abusive relationship.

Can you give me a hint as to what will happen ?

How long will the story be?

Aww poor Viggo- and Orlando of course. Write more- fast! - this is good and I wanna know what happens next!

AHH! YOU MUSNT STOP NOW!!! I NEED MORE!!

This is beautiful! I feel so sorry for Viggo! And for Orli! All that pain for all those years... no wonder he wanted to kill himself. Your writing is beatiful, as well, very well put together. I flows well, and really shows what the characters think and feel. I can't wait for more!
Cheers!
Rutaari

don't you dare leave me hanging like that, missy! This story is incredible. It is a tough subject to cover, but angst is healthy, thats' what I say! I love how you've set it a bit in future - predicting Orli's success, which will, of course, turn out to be entirely accurate! Viggo's pain at what he's done to Orli is heartbreaking, and the Hobbits condemning Vig for what has happened seems so like them to me. I know what it's like to have a close group of friends torn apart by a breakup, with everyone taking sides, and it is gutwrenchingly awful. Keep up the excellent work, hope you update soon!

Fainpathe Elanesse

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"What ARE you.....?"
"I'm....complicated." Dorian Gray

Absolutely stunning!! There's love, friendship, angst, humour and sadness. Please post more, I can't wait to see how this goes. Thanks for writing it :-)