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June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really liking this story. I'm eager to see how poor Orli's abuse develops and what Vig will do to help him heal. Keep up the good work.
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June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really l thi this story. I'm interested in seeing where it goes. Your description of domestic violence and how it can start is pretty accurate (I've studied the issue, esp. acquaintance rape extensively). I nic nice to see a realistic portrayal. Please continue this fic.
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May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great sto Exc Excellent dialogue and character interaction. I am in awe! Please continue soon!
Tanesa
Tanesa
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May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More please...
Yur story is outstanding and I love the angst, thank you.
I love what I read so far.
Keep up the terrific work that you are doing with your fic.
Sivan
Yur story is outstanding and I love the angst, thank you.
I love what I read so far.
Keep up the terrific work that you are doing with your fic.
Sivan
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May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yet another awesome, amazing, fantastic, utterly addictive, well-written chapter!!!!!!! thank you soo much!!!
i absolutely loved that totally adorable, mushy flashback in the beginning!! viggorli forever! orli sleeping on viggo's chest on the sofa... omg! *huggles everything in sight* that is just far far FAR TOO CUTE!!!!!!! aww romeo and juliet? haha that was so cute! and they ARE!!! (well, except for the sad ending...)
they are soo perfect... *sighs and melts into a boneless puddle*
hehe, sorry. i'll try to stop gushing and get on with my review!!
anyway, i think you have all the characters nailed~ i love helpless, abused orlando, and insecure viggo, and... hehe, pretty much everything! i love how ian is so knowledgable and 'mature' (hehehe), which balances out elijah and the rest of the immature hobbits...
and about the time that elijah is mad... woah yes it is sooo scary when people who are usually so good natured get pissed off! (i have this friend who is really really quiet... and she got mad at me and it was the scariest thing...)
lol, i can't WAIT until orli wakes up!!! (and he'd better wake up soon...) hehehe the anticipation......... please wake up orli!!
*plants huge kiss on orlando's lips* sleeping beauty!!!!!!!
hm... okay, bette... ... everyone is giving me weird looks... *glances around at people, who are all edging away*
teehee~
don't you dare stop writing!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!
pretty pretty beautiful please with a naked viggo doing a pole dance on a whipped cream cupcake??
lol whatever. just UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i don't know how i can stress that more!!!!!!! please please please!!!
rotfl, will stop bothering you.
cya (and better be soon!!! *tries to look threatening*)
-litzy.
i absolutely loved that totally adorable, mushy flashback in the beginning!! viggorli forever! orli sleeping on viggo's chest on the sofa... omg! *huggles everything in sight* that is just far far FAR TOO CUTE!!!!!!! aww romeo and juliet? haha that was so cute! and they ARE!!! (well, except for the sad ending...)
they are soo perfect... *sighs and melts into a boneless puddle*
hehe, sorry. i'll try to stop gushing and get on with my review!!
anyway, i think you have all the characters nailed~ i love helpless, abused orlando, and insecure viggo, and... hehe, pretty much everything! i love how ian is so knowledgable and 'mature' (hehehe), which balances out elijah and the rest of the immature hobbits...
and about the time that elijah is mad... woah yes it is sooo scary when people who are usually so good natured get pissed off! (i have this friend who is really really quiet... and she got mad at me and it was the scariest thing...)
lol, i can't WAIT until orli wakes up!!! (and he'd better wake up soon...) hehehe the anticipation......... please wake up orli!!
*plants huge kiss on orlando's lips* sleeping beauty!!!!!!!
hm... okay, bette... ... everyone is giving me weird looks... *glances around at people, who are all edging away*
teehee~
don't you dare stop writing!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!
pretty pretty beautiful please with a naked viggo doing a pole dance on a whipped cream cupcake??
lol whatever. just UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i don't know how i can stress that more!!!!!!! please please please!!!
rotfl, will stop bothering you.
cya (and better be soon!!! *tries to look threatening*)
-litzy.
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May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heartwrenching. Sorrowful. Eerie. Beautiful. Exquisite.
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May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love this fic. Orlando needs to wake uuuuuuuuuuuuuup!
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May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I am so impressed! Poor Orli-bear! OMG! I can not WAIT until he wakes up and we start seeing some SERIOUS angst! Not to mention, I'm gonna wring that filthy little perverts neck and....and... pain! LOTS of PAIN!!!!! LOVE IT! Please more!!!!
Rutaari
Rutaari
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May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Evil! Want more!
Yeah, I can sympathise with Viggo (not coz I have been in that position, but coz you wrote it all so vividly. Or maybe I just have too much imagination. Whatever.) Anyhoo, I get the feeling that Viggo might kill himself too. Just a warning. DON'T YOU DARE DO THAT! ORLI NEEDS VIGGO TO RECOVER and vice versa!!! IF YOU MAKE THEM KILL THEMSELVES YOU WILL FIND WHEEE!!!'S WRATH FALLING ON YOU!!!
Etc.
Update soon! :)
Yeah, I can sympathise with Viggo (not coz I have been in that position, but coz you wrote it all so vividly. Or maybe I just have too much imagination. Whatever.) Anyhoo, I get the feeling that Viggo might kill himself too. Just a warning. DON'T YOU DARE DO THAT! ORLI NEEDS VIGGO TO RECOVER and vice versa!!! IF YOU MAKE THEM KILL THEMSELVES YOU WILL FIND WHEEE!!!'S WRATH FALLING ON YOU!!!
Etc.
Update soon! :)
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May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!
Can't wait for the next installment. Poor Viggo, I really feel for him.
Can't wait for the next installment. Poor Viggo, I really feel for him.