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Excellent story. Incredibly sad though - domestic abuse is such a horrible thing to write about. But you are doing a really good job here and I look forward to reading more.

i hope mark gets his ass kicked GGRRR poor Orli please write next chapter soon

FINALLY!!! I looked almost every day to see if you ahd updated because I love this story and I am sooooo happy that you finally did. Great chapter. There was a lot of thinking, and if I could give constructive critisism I don't think that some of the reactions were very real. there was one in particular... which I cant seem to remember oh I remember now. When Viggo said basically that he loves Orlando not lovED, no one reacted to it. Maybe it was a typo and it was supposed to be loved but viggo said taht he is scared of how much he LOVES orlando and Orlando or Viggo didnt react to that. Just thought there shoudl be a reaction from Viggo at least, a biting of the tongue or something. Also there was a lot of thinking involved in between dialogue and it got kind of tedious to read through after awhile... or for me it did. Just an opinion though. Update soon! I love how this is unfolding!!

Cerasi

It was worth, and enjoyable...

I love your story, and I hope that you will find your time to update this lovely and angsty story.

Keep up the perfect work that you are doing with your fic.

Sivan

this story is sweet and touching. please e-mail me with updates!

More please...

I'm eagerly cannot wait to read what will happen next.

Please update soon.

I still love what I read.

Keep up the perfect work that you are doing with your fic.

Sivan

Ahh!!! Look what you did! You made me cry all over my new shirt!! *sob sob* but it's a good cry, i suppose...
You can't stop there! I repeat, you can't stop there! Such a naughty evil writer to leave us poor souls hanging in mid air like that... tsk tsk... update soon! :)

Starving are you? Maybe I can help with that. I am greatly enjoying your tale, the sorrows and the interactions between Viggo, Orlando, Dom and Lij. It is well-written and I am glad the chapters are long because it means more to read before I have to wait for more! Keep up the good work, and I hope Viggo can help Orlando without too many difficulties, poor Orli!
Kiril Tanesa

Hi,
Nice fic, I really like it. But...
HOW COULD YOow cow could you end the last chapter like that. I want to know what will happen now! WRITE!
Miyu

This story continues to excel and take my breath away. Your writing is crisp and clear and the story moves me to tears.
I am so excited that Orlando finally woke up and has seen Viggo. I know it's going to be a long road to recovery but I can't wait to read it and I'm hopeful for a happy ending. Please?
Anyway, please update soon!