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PLEASE, Please, Please update I love this fic SO much and I want to know what happens next!

PLEASE, PLEASE update soon LOVE this fic!

Hey! Is our poor little girl going to get left out of the smut? If this is only slash, I'd like to know.

You have a wonderful story going here. I'm looking forward to seeing the rest of it.
You were right, Viggo and Orli did need time together, glad to see they put it to good use. Make up sex is the best!

Now you promised me handcuffs in this story, ok, maybe you didn't, the fine line I walk between reality and fiction often blurs, beside the point, I want handcuffs. Not on the chica, I'm not a freak, (alright, again the blurry fine line.) Let's just say I don't deal in het.
After make up sex, don't we get kinky sex, hmmm? With handcuffs?

Uh, in the story, gotta be careful what kind of invitations I give to people I actually know.

good so far one little problem orlando has a sun tattoo not a star:) and a elven 9 on his right hand

Your story is very well writen, indeed. Its got a great story line too, those two together make it very very cool. Its great, I also hope to see when you'll be posting more!
Because Dogs Cant Look Up,
Kix

eesh.........Docter Daddy at your service......what an ass. Castration would be good...using the papers from the Medical Bar that ban him from practising medicine! (ouch...paper cut! HA!)

Update soon, yes? :)
Kessy

Its good, I think you should write more. this is actually something a bit more intellegent then others.

Wow....I'm really liking it thus far...it's packing a pretty powerful punch for so little given just yet. I look forward to updates:)
Oh, and happy belated birthday :)