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January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Am SO liking this. Need more! I like the fact that you made it so there are htree sexes instead of two, and also the fact that you remembered that orcs would most likely be the same since they are of elven origin. I also can't wait to get to the torture part. I have to say that I am one sick fuck, and love a good male elf in pain. Keep it up ne?! Namarie.
~Celesta Hellewise Harman
~Celesta Hellewise Harman
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January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Elrohir and his mother!Nasty Orcs!I hope that they will be rescued soon.I would love to read more especially Legolas/Elladan are a married couple.
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January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The prologue was fascinating. You have put a lot of thought into this and I am sure it will pay off. Someone made up another name for mpreg stories. There is Adar, Naneth and she was using Nileth for a male mother elf. Now you have made up a new word also. I think creativity should be rewarded but except for reviews just the act of creating and sharing will have to do.
I thought the first chapter was fine. A certain amount of exposition is necessary to set things up. When you get really good you will be able to disguise it more but you got across what we needed to know. I look forward to more. giggle
I thought the first chapter was fine. A certain amount of exposition is necessary to set things up. When you get really good you will be able to disguise it more but you got across what we needed to know. I look forward to more. giggle