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Thank goodness both of them were found.I hope that Elrohir might get some comfort that both his father and twin were there to save him and his mother.

Now that's what I call bravery.Elrohir's risking his soul and virtue in order to save his mother.And he's even willing not to go to Mandos' Halls so Elladan cannot follow.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! Sheer torture!!! Waiting for more I mean! WONDERFUL chapter! I was wondering how Elladan would react to his brother's cry across their link. you did a great job explaining and describing everything. also might i say that i am so glad for the long chapters. i also know how it is to get caught up on details when you have a story outlined. I do it myself. But that makes for a more interesting and full story in my mind. Keep it up and I more than eagerly await more! Namaarie!

~Celesta Hellewise Harman

What an amazing story! I was fully engaged in the action and you gave real life to these characters. Elladan and Elrohir tend to be written in the same way in every story they're featured in, but you managed to bring something new to these characters, and you've made them completely believeable. You also handled the rape and torture scene well, it was not offered for titilation but as a device of the orcs to to bto break Elrohir and Celebrian. I immensely enjoyed this story and I hope you update soon and frequently since you're only on point two of your outline.

Well I finally got caught up.
Oh terrible elf torture. I hate this part. Angst I can handle but I hate it when elves get hurt.
I thought the scenes between Elladan and Legolas were very nice. They seem like a newly wed couple. Kind of sweet and goofy.
At least the elf cavalry is heading in the right direction and the orcs have already taken a lot of hits. If the dwarves can just get there in time maybe everything will turn out alright. We know they will be rescued but it will be interesting to see how you bring that about.
Lots of anguish and pain so far. Ugh! Nasty orcss. giggle

OMG!!! *bows down ans worships* I could not have hoped for more!! That was WONDERFUL! Like I've stated many times before, I'm one sick fuck, and I LOVE things like this. I can't wait to see what Elladan and Elrond's reactions will be when they see their beloved brother's/son's condition! That is going to be good!!! I can't wait! Do write more soon! I can barely stand the wait! Much luvs! Namaarie!

~Celesta Hellwise Harman

Smart of Elrohir stealing that key.I just hope that they can use it before they are found out.

Chapter one
Well this is it Celebrian and Elrohir are going to be orc fodder. Sigh. I hate this part of the story. I want to shout run, run, for your lives. No one lis listens to me. Well at least the elves will run to their rescue. giggle

I very much enjoyed the first two chapters of your story. What a fresh idea of a story you have written. I esspecialy like how you explained your AU ideas. Alot of authors will not be so detailed and the reader is lost. I am looking forward to more. Thank you for aderfderful read.

Poor Elrohir and Celebrian!