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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well that was very exciting.
It is nice to know that Legolas is more than just a pretty face. He has a brain underneath all that blond hair. I thought his idea had a lot of merit and it worked. They all three shared a bond.
I thought is was a nice touch when Elladan realihow how much pain, physical and emotional, Elrohir was going through and was humbled by it. Also that healing was going to take time.
Poor Thranduil and Elrond, comparing notes on loss and Elrond fearing he will lose both his sons and maybe Legolas too.
As far as your cliffie goes. I know that they are all fine. Drained, exhausted and unconscious but fine. Elrohir's fever is gone and the three just need a good rest and some food and they will be ready to go home to Imladris. And if you have a different idea I will cover my ears and sing to drown you out. giggle
It is nice to know that Legolas is more than just a pretty face. He has a brain underneath all that blond hair. I thought his idea had a lot of merit and it worked. They all three shared a bond.
I thought is was a nice touch when Elladan realihow how much pain, physical and emotional, Elrohir was going through and was humbled by it. Also that healing was going to take time.
Poor Thranduil and Elrond, comparing notes on loss and Elrond fearing he will lose both his sons and maybe Legolas too.
As far as your cliffie goes. I know that they are all fine. Drained, exhausted and unconscious but fine. Elrohir's fever is gone and the three just need a good rest and some food and they will be ready to go home to Imladris. And if you have a different idea I will cover my ears and sing to drown you out. giggle
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love your story.Hope you will finish it.Hope haldir will show up soon.Love this elf.
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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice scene with Elladan and Thranduil. I do think that Elladan needs to grow up a little more. I hope that Legolas isn't in an abusive situation.
I know Elrohir will be fine. He will be won't he?
Well the mess deepens so you need to clear it up for us. OK.
Glad you are back. giggle
I know Elrohir will be fine. He will be won't he?
Well the mess deepens so you need to clear it up for us. OK.
Glad you are back. giggle
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NNNNOOOOO!!!!Elrohir!!!!!He must make it!You just made my weekend!Major thanks!KUDOS!!!
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March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sniffles* Where did you go? Are you still going to write more of this fiou lou like torture huh?... 'Cause you're really killin me with the wait... PLEASE!!!!!! PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEEEEAAAAAAASSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! UPDATED SOON!!!!!
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March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please.Where is the next chapter???Good story.
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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Elladan is for it now. Thranduil is going to thrash him for what has happened to Legolas.
I like how Legolas is very assertive about his needs, wants and the marriage. Against Elladan nothing else would work. That first year for humans is truly tough, I wonder how long the first year equint int is for elves? How much longer does Legolas and Ellandan have to work things out.
I liked the primping on Legolas' part with his new hair cut. At my daughter's school everyone shaved their heads because one of the teachers lost her hair due to chemotherapy for breast cancer and couldn't wear wigs. They made her break out. It was a little freaky seeing all those bald heads. I thought it was very touching though. The teacher is fine so far.
I was glad you didn't get really into what they were doing to Elrohir to heal him. Some stories get really descriptif mef medical details and I would just as soon skip that kind of stuff. Torture I can usually take but not medical gore. Dealt too much with that in ER.
Looking forward to an update as always. giggle
I like how Legolas is very assertive about his needs, wants and the marriage. Against Elladan nothing else would work. That first year for humans is truly tough, I wonder how long the first year equint int is for elves? How much longer does Legolas and Ellandan have to work things out.
I liked the primping on Legolas' part with his new hair cut. At my daughter's school everyone shaved their heads because one of the teachers lost her hair due to chemotherapy for breast cancer and couldn't wear wigs. They made her break out. It was a little freaky seeing all those bald heads. I thought it was very touching though. The teacher is fine so far.
I was glad you didn't get really into what they were doing to Elrohir to heal him. Some stories get really descriptif mef medical details and I would just as soon skip that kind of stuff. Torture I can usually take but not medical gore. Dealt too much with that in ER.
Looking forward to an update as always. giggle
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January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
just to let you know i liked your story very muchHope to read more soon.There are so many storys out there where they just stop in the middle.Hope you will finish yours.It is very good.Thanks
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January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was probably the most sweetest and most loyal thing to do.They all cut their braids so Celebrian and Elrohir won't feel out of place.Think I'm going to cry.
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January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!! I’m soo sorry, but the rest of this story was amazing and… you really should try rewriting this chapter…*cringes* Gods I have no idea how to put this to make it not sound like a flame, but this latest chapter sucked big time.
First of all, while the medicine you had Elrond use on Elrohir was fine, you should have at least made him sound more mature, that was just plane ridiculous and embarrassing.
Second, while I can understand the sentiments of all the elves cutting off their hair… WHY? There’s no point to it, if you want them to try and comfort their lady, then please try something a bit more realistic, not even elves are that sentimental when it comes down to it, at least not a whole army of them. You only see that shit happening in the stupid Disney movies!! And you are most definitely not writing for Disney, cause they wouldn’t dare touch rape and all the other stuff you are.
So please first off, don’t take me f fla flamer, I don’t want to be one, but do try something different? Perdy please? The rest of this story has been so bloody good and don’t ruin it with this?
-Eddie
First of all, while the medicine you had Elrond use on Elrohir was fine, you should have at least made him sound more mature, that was just plane ridiculous and embarrassing.
Second, while I can understand the sentiments of all the elves cutting off their hair… WHY? There’s no point to it, if you want them to try and comfort their lady, then please try something a bit more realistic, not even elves are that sentimental when it comes down to it, at least not a whole army of them. You only see that shit happening in the stupid Disney movies!! And you are most definitely not writing for Disney, cause they wouldn’t dare touch rape and all the other stuff you are.
So please first off, don’t take me f fla flamer, I don’t want to be one, but do try something different? Perdy please? The rest of this story has been so bloody good and don’t ruin it with this?
-Eddie